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Hey author I can't seem to join your discord using the code you have given in the bottom of the chapter,do you have any other codes or invites to your channel that I can use to join.
The story at the start mostly follows canon,The shibuya arc is where the real changes begin and there will be a lot of yuji glazing,overall I really like this story,The only complaint is that the author does not update consistently and the chapters are rather short
Hey author can u make the chapters bigger because they are very short
The story is very good but the chapters are short and the author sometimes doesn't update regularly
HOLYYYYYYY SHITTTTTTT!!!!
The story is very good,one of the best jjk fanfic there is but the updates are not consistent thats the only problem I noticed
The author changes the power system which is one of the reasons jjk is popular so it overcomplicates the entire story and makes it boring.
The idea for this story was great and it had lot of potential but sadly the author didn't deliver it well.The grammar and writing structure of this story is horrendous,the chapters are rushed and the characters feel like they are emotionless puppets.
The story is not good,the reincarnation part os not only overused in this type of fanfics but the author also delivered it badly,the chapters are short,the characters sre like drones,the story is rushed and the writing structure is terrible.I don't recommend this because this fic will give u a headache to read