Dark_Weaver_18

Looks interesting tho

I can say its gonna be a good story, just need to make it longer so the readers can understand what's happening at the chapter, and explain the world background, for the characters, you should give them some character development in the upcoming chapters great story and i love actions so i stay tuned^^

I see you did a great chapter, i'm looking forward for more!

Thanks for the review, i can assure you that i will make more interesting chapters for all of you, so stay tuned and support me^^

kababayan!

Thank you for a great review, you can assure that i can give you more interesting chapters stay tune!