Songs that the Hyades shall sing, Where flap the tatters of the King. Song of my soul, my voice is dead; Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed. Shall dry and die in, Lost Carcosa.
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Damn, I was thinking about how much of a shame it was :sob....
Honestly, I do feel like Kumogawa will eventually betray and absolutely backstab Kushina, but that's just how I read it :sob. I might be a little twisted...
DANG bro, if you actually know what Bayesian inverse problems are, hats off to you. (If you don't and you just searched it up, well, phuc me.)
Lol, I'm imagining the blood red flowers were poppy.
Get better author-san! Although, I do have a question, will there be a love interest in this fic?
No romance yet, which is a definite plus to me. As long as it ain't harem, I'm good.
Lol, after we had to read Crime and Punishment in HS, the "smart kids" in our class would all snobbily go around "recommending" it to the people who hadn't opted to take the class we were in. I kinda cringed and found it kinda annoying mostly, but like, even then, Crime and Punishment is akin to like oyasumi punpun, you don't read it unless you're super depressed or you're forced to :sob
TLDR; [4.4/5] It would probably rank in the top 5 fanfic I've ever read in my life. Honestly, no words, it's a masterpiece. Writing Quality: It's written almost perfectly for a Webnovel audience. The trap most native english speakers fall into when writing webnovels is that they write them too similarly to their academic papers, this fic shattered my expectations of this phenomenon and inverted my standard for alternative solvency. The writing quality is an oasis in a barren wasteland, you won't be disappointed. Stability of Updates: Can't really judge this until around 50 chaps, we'll see. Story Development: Looking at it objectively, the fic has a slow pace, yet you never notice it because it's a pace that makes sense with the character of the MC. And, you will not be disappointed during the key turning moments, the tension building is great. The author also chose to do something that like, 0 COTE fanfics do and that is to actually write EXPULSIONS. It's extremely refreshing. Character Design: This is the part the author does the best. The character interactions are honestly on the level of Absolute Regression's character interactions. They're realistic, raw, and oftentimes, it would elicit some sort of outburst of laughter or a visceral chuckle at, well, you'd understand if you read the fanfic. Perfection. World Background: It's COTE, not really much to say. Like, the one unique thing the author could do is like, play with the transmigration aspect a little more, but honestly I don't see how it'd help the fanfic at all. The world building is solid, that's all, but it's not a bad thing either. I'm addicted, I'll probably come back for each and every chapter, and each chapter is long af too, more akin to what you'd find on ff dot net. I would strongly recommend this fanfic, it's actually THAT good.
This paragraph and the one above it say the same thing?
I do not know why I read through the entirety of that author's note...