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Quite an extreme way to test someone's character, but I guess the effectiveness rises with the extremity of it all. Interesting chapter.

I think something is wrong, from what I've seen he isn't the kind of guy to have these thoughts.

I just had the thought after the part when the player were discussing the drills after practice. Has Jake ever had a single normal conversation with someone in the story? Nice chapter.

Awesome!

A loss?!

Could it be possible we're getting a no score on them game? Our turtlebacks have truly ascended to a new level of defense! Interesting chapter.

He also can make a great turtle shell out of any team, haha.

Hey, that's something. Way better than before.

Interesting chapter.

It took me a couple of re-reads to realize we shifted to the meeting room. You should consider adding an indicator through dialogue, space, or symbol of some sort to indicate a change of area and/or time.