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Blood_soaked_bar

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2024-05-17 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Blood_soaked_bar4 days ago
    trả lời One_For_None

    Hey, I think the length of your chapters could use a little tweaking, and the writing style might benefit from some extra attention. It feels a bit rushed at times, like you’re summarizing the story instead of diving into all the details. Keep at it though! You’ve got great potential.

  • Blood_soaked_bar4 days ago
    bình luận

    For the love of whatever God you believe in, please remove the ‘=====’ from any future chapters. I listen to this book using the audio function on WebNovel, and I find it very annoying to hear ‘=====’ for 20 to 30 seconds just to indicate a chapter break. Instead, please use three to four dots and skip a line to make the separation clear. Thank you!

  • Blood_soaked_bar4 days ago
    trả lời One_For_None

    I advise you not to have an AI write your story, but rather use it to help bounce ideas back and forth and correct grammar or spelling mistakes. it will assist with translations as well. Just remember not to let the AI change anything in what you’ve written, as it could make your story feel mechanical and disconnected. Good luck to you! I really like the idea and look forward to reading the next chapter.

  • Blood_soaked_bar4 days ago
    trả lời One_For_None

    To make your life easier Ask an AI these question if you need them 1. For Grammar and Spelling Correction: • Question Format: • “Can you please correct the grammar and spelling in the following text? The source is [title of source, e.g., anime, story, etc.].” • Example: • “Can you please correct the grammar and spelling in the following text? The source is from the anime Naruto.” • Text: “Sasuke was walking throw the forest when he seen naruto.” 2. For Translation from One Language to Another: • Question Format: • “Can you translate this [language] text to [target language]? The source is [title of source, e.g., anime, story, etc.].” • Example: • “Can you translate this Japanese text to English? The source is from the anime One Piece.” • Text: “海賊王になりたい!” 3. For Both Grammar and Translation Corrections with Reference: • Question Format: • “Can you both correct the grammar/spelling and translate the following text from [language] to [target language]? The source is from [title of source, e.g., anime, story, etc.].” • Example: • “Can you both correct the grammar/spelling and translate the following text from Japanese to English? The source is from the anime My Hero Academia.” • Text: “僕はヒーローになるために頑張る!”

  • Blood_soaked_bar7 days ago
    trả lời DaoistzZeKRn

    Thank God that I didn’t continue reading and I suspect that he will be a wizard swinging his sword like a berserker, am I right?

  • Blood_soaked_bar7 days ago
    bình luận

    If you make him five years old when he reads the newspaper, and there are 35 years between that moment and the start of the original story, it would make the story more interesting. He would be at his peak instead of entering his twilight years when the original story begins.

  • Blood_soaked_bar8 days ago
     công bố

    Hey mate, just wanted to say this novel is absolutely fantastic! Seriously, I’ve got a lot of respect for you as the author for not going down the route of making the protagonist perfect. I can’t stand books where the main character is flawless—it’s just not real. The authenticity of a character can really get lost if they don’t have any flaws or struggles. So yeah, massive props to you for keeping things real. Now, I do have a small thought on the direction of the story. I couldn’t help but feel that the protagonist is kind of stumbling through life, you know? Like, she doesn’t seem to have a clear goal or direction. Instead of moving toward something, it’s more like she’s just figuring things out on the go, which, I get it, can be pretty relatable! But if you want her to feel even more real, I think it’d be cool to show her jealousy of her sister a bit more. Not just saying she’s jealous, but really giving us a glimpse of how that feels. Maybe she starts copying little things her sister does, like changing her hairstyle or trying to mimic some of her lifestyle choices. Even after she gets her own magic, she still feels a bit jealous of the ease with which her sister can use her magical abilities until she discovers her own special magic. Those small, relatable details could make her feel even more authentic, you know? Oh, and just so you know, I’ve reached chapter 43, Salazar Slytherin’s Scriptorium: One Year Ago. It’s been a while since I read that part, so I don’t remember every single detail of her character buildup. But I do remember that her character stood out as being distinct and, importantly, not perfect. That’s what stuck with me, and it’s honestly why I still like it so much. But hey, that’s just my two cents. Keep up the awesome work—seriously, loving it! Catch you later!

  • Blood_soaked_bar10 days ago
     công bố

    This one has been stopped for one year. Can you please remove this novel from here? It is taking the first place with only one review so I don’t know what exactly going on here.

  • Blood_soaked_bar17 days ago
    trả lời plotplanner

    harem or not