Hi, call me M.C. Magical! I aspire to be a famous writer, and one day, I hope to see my stories adapted into films.
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I have decided to re write this guys I have seen faults but this was also my first novel so there is going to be a change or I make a different one but the same name? or a completely different one with the same characters you guys can decided
its explaining the story really well, also its one of the further! it would actually be cool if the author adds a scene when they get back in the time and trying to undo the war, I most likely advice to read this this is a masterpiece also reallt well written the author knows what he does!
why is this sooo good? they explain everything good pacing is good not fast not slow its just perfect the characters are good explained even if I am at chapter 1 already this is amezing really amezing you should read it! the author should keep up the work
looks like harry potter "a boy who lived" and orphange
you explain it good how its going and its pretty realistic if you think about it you can get some way in the character (not really in I mean the thoughts)
the writer tells everything good adds things good in ways so you wont be confused give it a chance its amezing!
I am at chapter 1 but it is so amezing need to read more though but I alr like it from here!
MAGIC BEASTS COOL
will take a look at it👀
I will edit it then and check if I can add something to make it better thank you for thr feedback! and no problem english is not my first langauge either😂