Milly_Sabil_9041

i watched alot of post-apocalyptic movies, i thought to switch it to books. I've read a lot of them on webnovel so far, I think I can tell what's good etc. i can't judge the story so early, but author, please update. i really love it and i'd hate to totally forget about it. give us more updates.

I didn't really think I'd like the Lycan King trope since Im more a werewolf Alpha King girlie, but turns out I didn't know much and there's not a big different. The book is surprisingly good, there's a few changes that can help improve some grammatical errors but each time I come back when new chapters are uploaded I notice a change and better quality, so I'm guessing the author will go back to the first chapters and perfect them too, but it's nothing overbearing. Other than that, I hate the main male character through the middle of the book, around chapter 30's and so, but I figured that his past and the way he was raised played a major role. His character made sense. At a point, I'm rooting for different characters to get together with the main female lead, but slowly, the main male character, Jordan, the way he warms up to the girl but is stubborn about it kinda gives me butterflies. Oh and the sex scenes, yup, I'm sticking around for those. LOVED THEM. Looking forward to more updates author.

see, exactly what I mean

Fact that it reads 'and faces the consequences' not 'or faces the consequences'. Im not sure if that's an error, if it's not, it kinda plays on his role as an overbearing Lycan Alpha who bought her and is used to having everything handed to him because of his power. But at the same time, it does show his toxicity and sadism in enjoying making others suffer at the twist of his fingers.

but then again what if Jordan kills Carlos. Here's a better idea, and I'm not so sure if the author will see this, but so far, Cecelia's character, as per what I've snooped even in the other three chapters on here, she seems to have her own skeletons in the closet. I mean, unlike the rest of them, she's like an older sister and she's guiding and protecting them the best she can. She's been a slave the longest and she understands the king the most. Maybe she deserves a little story of her own. Like her and Carlos. I think that'd work, right? please say yes

I think my toxic trait is that I kinda want her to make out with that Carlos guy. he sounds dreamy and mysterious

I'm not a fan of Main Male character point of view, especially when the book has a preferred female audience, but Jordan's POV doesn't sound so bad. Loving this so far, keep it up author

this is my first story so far, I'm not so sure about stories here on webnovel since I usually read paperbacks, but I'm liking it so far.