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Hey Brynden. Thanks for the comment. It made me really happy. Well, at first, it made me angry, but then I thought I am not a damn good writer to even defend my writer ego and took a moment instead of replying instantly. Btw this happened when I was in the theatre about to watch a movie. So, I thought about your comment for about 3 hours before I came to the conclusion that you actually perfectly showed the emotion I wanted my readers to show. Anyway, I apologize for the short chapter, as I did not want to put Diana’s actual cause of distress in the same chapter as my POV. I don’t know why. However, partially, it might have been that it was 3 am when I finished writing, and I was dead tired. About the draft thing, I can’t read my chapters after I write them; I have low self-esteem and am a perfectionist. I have toned down the perfectionist side to only very important things. So, if I read my chapters after I write them, I am 95% sure I would delete them to write something new or perfect it. I do have a solution for this, which I have been thinking about. Maybe I put a Patreon or something where people who wish to provide insight on the drafts can do so. What do you think? Now, before you answer, I wish you to take a moment and look at the story like it is a real-life story. What is vital in a relationship? Communication. However, Diana should not communicate easily about her source of distress, even with her loved ones, as she is a princess. She is prideful and strong. Why would she break easily? I am adding personalities to characters and trying to leave some flaws for future character development. Now, I added myself because it is for the ending, which will come at the end. I do not wish for my story to feel stagnant, like: Movie I Am the King. What would happen— Alexia goes to a world? Takes the women she likes and technology. That’s it? That’s why I am leaving little eggs if you can notice them. That will make a good villain. It’s an experiment. What do you think?

I find it better to talk with my readers. It helps me connect with them and encourage me to write. I guess...

Thanks... But.. I have stopped looking now... I find technology and strangers better now... Like How I can talk to you without worrying that you will judge me irl. ~ a new chapter dropped, make sure to tell me how it is.

I'm glad you like it. I am currently swamped between my lectures and assignments. That's just an excuse I tell myself. If you've read the notes I leave for readers, you know I am a lazy person; I am working on myself. I did start working on myself, so I might upload a chapter soon.

I am sorry for the trouble it caused you, my dear reader. This issue has already been brought up by a few readers, and the problem was fixed in the later chapters. I did not change it in the previous chapters because I wanted to keep the comments that my fellow readers left there. Can you do one thing and change it from a one-star review or delete it and comment next time? I have two one-star reviews now, and they might draw away new readers. One last thing: Thanks for reading this novel. It is my first time. I hope all goes well.

Too chaotic writing style for us my good sir. A suggestion: write the lines of the MC or characters in cursive to distinguish which is inner thoughts and which is the dialogue.

Yeah, always. What are the suggestions?

I vote for Latex, Sex outdoors and food play.