Sam_3949

Back for good author??

Tftc

Again repeated the last paragraph

Tftc, can’t wait for more

Feels like there is a disconnect between chapters. No transition, just cut streight to the next important thing. The last two pargraphs are repeated. Good work otherwise, waiting for more chapters. Tftc.

You started to repeat text. Honestly a quick read through would avoid a majority of mistakes.

Wow she actually said “human” outloud

You could just do it manually or ask an AI to do it. You could also post in spanish or whatever language your writing in, WebNovel gives us a translation option for for foregin languages.

Tftc

Absolutely great so far, just needs more chapters. Can’t wait for the rest. Keep up the good work.