Asurathoth

This author is crazy, he makes many ridiculous mistakes with each new chapter, they already created the game and uploaded it to the platform several chapters before and already had more than eighty thousand people who downloaded the game.

Look at the error there, nobody knows what Stark built so far and the protagonist said directly what he built and Peter didn't comment on it at all.

nah I personally think it's impossible to take this kind of plot seriously with a mixed world, after all, both worlds are too chaotic, absurd dark technologies, different energy/magic systems, a lot of weekly/monthly confusion on the part of Ben 10's villains, a lot of black technologies and magical items in the hands of some random punks, aliens hidden in human form on the planet that are always coming and going all the time. The aliens are always invading to fight without the government noticing, great disasters/destruction caused in the fights between Ben and the villains. Not to mention that Ben 10's worldview has a gigantic number of alien races, Marvel also has galactic empires everywhere, so how would you keep the worldview stable taking into account everything that both natives of the two worlds can add? There are also Ben 10's Celestial Sapiens, what would the situation be like when they met Marvel's Celestial Clan? In fact, maybe about 90% of Marvel's races were created by the Celestials, so in this mixed world is it enough to say that it still continues that way? Anyway, we all know that Ben 10 is a cartoon, the outrageous things that Ben, a boy of about 10/15 years old does are usually ignored by everyone, even if he is in a place full of surveillance countless times and presses that flashy green watch that turns him into some alien right after. It's hard to believe that SHIELD, Hydra, the government and others wouldn't be interested in his watch right away, after all, for all they know, the boy is just a lucky guy who found the watch first. Even if they know that the Omnitrix cannot be removed and that it 'chooses' its own user, they wouldn't give up in any way and wouldn't hesitate to cut off his arm to take the artifact. They could even hold his parents hostage so that he could remove it on his own or if it didn't work, they would try to control him. Even the Avengers would not be willing to see such an artifact being held in the hands of a teenager, after all, it is a technological item and not a mutation that generated super powers like Peter's case. That's why i always think it's unnecessary to deliver the Omnitrix in the form of a watch, it would be enough to transform it into an artifact that can be held in the soul/spiritual consciousness or even transform the watch into an ability of the protagonist and life goes on.

The author could have sent the protagonist to New York and taken his family with him, or he could have made his family disappear in some accident and I think it's a shame that the author didn't make him an orphan right at the beginning.

I just feel a little weird about how wild people's thoughts are going to be after they learn about him. 'Look, this is the guy who became one of the most intelligent beings on the planet and even awakened super powers after being knocked out by that little Firefly from Gotham.' I say this because Tony Stark himself demonstrated unparalleled intelligence from an early age, even creating some engine or something related to it at the age of 6, so it's acceptable, but the protagonist is already 16 and became super intelligent overnight.

So far i haven't seen any sense in her creating a company. Each person who buys her game will spend $15, i don't remember how many points this amount of money guarantees her or if she only receives the converted points or if she receives both the points and the money, but it should be possible for her to turn the points into money again. What's even stranger is that she could probably create this company through the system and everything would be fine. But now she herself went in person to resolve these issues of creating the company, so it's obvious that they should have the ability to know about her, either through the cameras that recorded her appearance or through all the information in the documents she herself left. It's impossible to tell me that this can't be done, after all, if the system can keep her hidden from all possibilities of discovering her identity, whether by mundane or supernatural means, then it should be possible for this system to create the company without the need for her participation. Now she will have a residence for the company, employees and everything. This makes it almost impossible to hide her identity, unless she puts someone in charge of everything in her place, not to mention that it's impossible not to come after her after getting clues. All these gaps in the story are so annoying that they almost completely took away my interest in reading it, and the author doesn't bother to say anything about it other than the usual excuse. "The system is protecting and hiding all information about you." How are you going to hide it if she herself doesn't mind active exposure and leaves countless clues behind? So far, the protagonist hasn't been given basic information about the world, at least so that she can be more careful and more alert instead of going around like it's no big deal. She doesn't know anything about Marvel, DC, Hellsing, and others. However, she knows Fallout, Star Wars, and many others. From what i understand, the author is going to make it seem like everything she creates won't exist in the current world she finds herself in and that everything that exists in that world she herself won't know anything about. It's a bit of a shitty situation, but a viable one. After reading this far, i think it would be simpler to keep her locked in the apartment, after all, she wasn't going to die anyway.

The correct answer should be; "Thank you, system. I never want to be discovered, so even if at any point i ask you to stop hiding my information, please just ignore it."

If it doesn't depend on the 'power' of the 'system', creating a company and buying Twitch would make it abandon the whole confidentiality issue. I don't see the point in buying Twitch when it could create a hundred times better streaming/gaming platform entirely focused on the games it creates in the future.

If i had a visible interest meter, it would have gone from 90 to 30 in an instant after reading this chapter. Of course, i have nothing against the novel or the author, it just makes me sick to see this situation where she has to go and 'experience' it to find out first-hand the information that could be seen through a simple internet search. Of course, the information may not be open to the public, which i believe is almost impossible not to be with the huge miscellany of possible sources of power in this world, such as mutants, metahumans, inhumans and others. A small expenditure of points could solve the problem, even spending points in exchange for basic information would be enough to make her alert enough for her to think about buying something that would prevent the detection of the 'supernatural factor' emanating from her before leaving the apartment. She was already warned that after awakening the mutation she would be considered a 'mutant'(there are other possible names as well that i forgot) and she was also warned about the type of detection that could discover this aspect of her. So it should be enough to keep her alert, but she left directly when the apartment was unlocked without caring about it and the most outrageous thing is the fact that she left without even doing basic research about where she is or taking a look at the documents she received. If the 'system' doesn't protect her mind, it's pretty obvious that at this point Xavier would already know everything about her, because i highly doubt that Charles wouldn't realize that the energy signature she emanates is the same one he felt a while ago, that alone would be enough to make him curious to the point of gnashing his teeth with the desire to read her mind directly. Of course, maybe the author simply wants to take her to Xavier's school to find one or more girlfriends or something like that. By the way, didn't the author say that her voice was altered when she made an announcement in the game, so if there was someone near her who was present at the announcement, they might be able to recognize her by her voice? I also don't believe she has mental protection, after all, the system store has already shown some items used to protect the mind, so there's a good chance she doesn't have mental protection beyond this mysterious ability that she can't use. I can't get over how outrageous it is that the system store sold her a mutation that directly turns her into a mutant, after all, what they sold was the mutation and not the X Gene. However, it could be that her body already existed in this world as a variant or that it was created by the system based on the humans of this world, so buying the mutation was the equivalent of buying an 'X Gene awakening with a clearly focused direction in telekinesis'. I just expected her to gain purely telekinesis without too many biological changes, at least the changes shouldn't be big enough to put her directly in the club of mutants who depend on the X Gene to be considered mutants. I don't know, i think it would be more realistic behavior if she had sought information about the world she finds herself in above anything she has done so far(besides creating the first game to get points, of course).

I just think it's really nonsensical that the author made the protagonist not even think for a moment about spending a small amount of points to get basic information about the world she's in. Of course, if the protagonist doesn't know about Marvel/DC/Hellsing, then it's 'partly' basically irrelevant, 'partly' because i think anyone in the situation she's in would like to know what world she's in, not to mention that if she does know about Marvel/DC, the nicknames 'Spideysidekick' and 'Darknight' could be a clue so that she'd at least be intrigued enough to spend points in exchange for some information. I believe that if she knew she was in a version of Marvel where 'mutants' exist, she probably wouldn't go out and buy the 'mutation' directly and would at least buy some kind of barrier that would prevent all types of detection to put in her apartment. After all, it's said that she can't leave the apartment, but at no point is it said that others can't enter or can't 'sense' where she is. Her apartment also doesn't look like a 'dimensional refuge' or 'small private world' type place that only she can access, which is a shame, after all, it's always good to have your own place that is invulnerable, impossible for any being to find and that guarantees absolute security and discretion. Of course, if she already knows what world she's in and I've simply forgotten, then sorry.