There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you - Maya Angelou
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In all honestly I love it, as someone who enjoy cultivation manhua/novel this honestly enact a clean display of the situation, even if its just a Novel I was able to vividly visualize the scene in my head and thats a clear representation of a great novel! I learned so much things while reading chapter 1, as a fellow Author, I believe this novel is boun to greater things! If I have a powerstone today I would have send one but unfortunately I used it all already. Anyway great story great plot and great writing technique. This is a gem!
Chapter 1 really feels deep, I was hesitant at first to read it cause I thought it was BL, im glad that man was his father not his lover. I like the emotion portrayed in each line and the lingering feeling of death fear and regret hits well for jackson. Great story!
Thank you for the review! And yes I wanted Zhiyun to stay true to his character because thats how I portray him :)
Thank you so much!
I love how things were explained on the first 2 chapters, it gives me a clear view of what to visualize with the settings and characters, altho I am abit confused with the sudden transition, ill give it a 5 for plot idea especially that I love reading kingdom stories.
Hahaha thanks tho lets see if there will be friends or pawns instead 😈😈
Thank you for your feedback 🥰🥰
Ohhh I get it, but thats what actually happened :) Zhiyun is a former Demonic Emperor who once ruled the Celestial Realm with absolute authority and unmatched power. However, his immense strength and ambition led to his downfall, and he was betrayed, losing his body and power. Now, trapped in the body of a weak human boy with no spiritual roots and broken meridians, Zhiyun is forced to adapt and rebuild his strength from the bottom of the cultivation hierarchy. If you proceed in chapter 2 you will understand ☺️☺️
Same same you got good taste 😜😜
Thank you for the feedback hahaha and which title makes you feel misleading the novel title or chapter title? This is the first time im hearing this and im honestly curious 😊😊😊