SanjarAli

Once in a while masterpiece. Was hesitant at first, and even delayed reading it. But, when I started, it immediately got me hooked. Keep up the awesome work, and please continue it. Completing it would be amazing too, but considering the potential it has, less than a hundred chapters is an injustice to it. 🖤

Thanks for reading. Sorry to inform you that it's been dropped for a few reasons; the story and quality dropped significantly as well as readership (0-1 readers...), the writing and story could've been a lot better, etc. I might rewrite it (had plans for this one too, though in the big picture, they aren't as satisfactory as it seems to me) at some point from scratch and with a new name.

it still counts

No. No one won't in this app if you ask around everywhere on comments.

(It doesn't even deserve that one star)

This is blatant plagiarism! You should be blind and dumb af to not see it!

the format of '<'system'> isn't really intriguing and eye catching.

Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed: 1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!

in a good way or bad...

Here's a mistake. the first pack is 'weapons'. right now both are 'accessories'