Nalzaar

Welp, they're all cooked. Edward done been having a warehouse for a while now. [img=proud]

That one dude is going to be fuming with jealousy. [img=proud]

Bro wasn't about to go name 36 angels [img=recommend]

He 's a different breed 😂

Let's go, we're already starting off with an army.

I'll probably write more chapters in the perspectives of other characters. BTW, 3 of the love interests have already been mentioned.

Oh, I haven't watched that in a while. I should probably start watching that new season.

Nah, that's actually crazy and funny. [img=recommend]

It's an alright story for me. I like the world background and how we have eliras, which give extraordinary powers to those that have them. I do have some problems though. First (although I'm not too hung up on this), there's a few spelling and grammar errors here and there. And also, the main character tries to seem like some pro assassin who's cold hearted and stuff like that, but he tends to get so emotional and likes cracking jokes (which sound cringe imo), but that is only my personal opinion. So overall it's pretty alright and I wouldn't say it's anywhere close to being bad. It just depends on the reader.

I was honestly planning on shamelessly giving myself a five star review but I decided to give myself an honest review of my own story. It took me over a month to start posting again, but I did start posting daily, so 4 stars for that. I can't really say about character design so 3 stars. This is my first work, so I suck at writing quality and story development, but I wouldn't say it's hopeless, so 4 stars.