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Cero_Sir

Cero_Sir

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Not a trained writer. solo work and writing is just a hobby.

2024-01-14 đã tham giaGlobal
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31.5h

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  • Cero_Sir
    Cero_Sir3mth
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    whew some error here

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    I respawn endlessly but that's basically it
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    Cero_Sir3mth
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    perhaps Raphael is also reincarnated, wouldn't be strange if he is lol

    For the rest of the affinity tests no one got as good results as Raphael got.Some got better then Ren but most were around Rens level except for one.That one was a girl by the name of Ruth who was friends with Raphael and Ren.She had 10000 mana and a high affinity for mana.Ren knew that both of her parents were mages so it made sense for her to have a lot of mana.Raphael didn't have any parents who were mages as far as Ren knew so it was confusing for him.Why did Raphael have so much mana then?He was the same as Ren who didn't have any mages as parents.
    I respawn endlessly but that's basically it
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    Cero_Sir3mth
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    The story is alright so far and I don't wanna be that guy but a space after "." would be nice.I don't really mind the other errors like spelling and stuff but would also be nice if you take some time editing and cleaning.

    Ch 2 Early education and training
    I respawn endlessly but that's basically it
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    Cero_Sir3mth
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    The world was too cringe and God had to spawn some abomination to wipe out the cringe lol

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    I respawn endlessly but that's basically it
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  • Cero_Sir
    Cero_Sir4mth
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    Sheesh this book bussin frfr.anyway, author here. if you are looking for op mc then get out, this book doesn't have it. i like a story where the mc had difficulties in his journey. i have zero idea on where this is going but, as long as i have the story i like in my head I'll write them. Please be patient with the wording here I'm the only one working on this novel. this is just a hobby of mine.if you somehow find this and entertain by it, idk save it, like it i dunno how this app work fully.

    Why Am I Reincarnated... Again
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