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A back long stick? Seriouly or i am reading ir wrong
Naruto X Haku
I didn't really like this development, I know the premise is for the protagonist to be Overpowered, but this is too much, the protagonist has just reached the level that only specific spirits can fight him, like Rava and Vatu, or The Mother of Faces and the Face Taker and so on. Beings that the protagonist will probably never face, so even though he is so powerful, what's the point? There is no reason for him to use this power. Him being the strongest or being the weakest makes no difference if he never has to fight.
I don't support this relationship, not because it doesn't make sense, you developed it well. But I simply prefer Luffy and Uta to end up together, although her appearance was brief, I still think it would make more sense if these two had ended up together.
Emotional
Mid, it took me a time to understand they where on a bed and not on their feet
This, my author, can be resolved with Stones
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