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LuciferTheDevil767

LuciferTheDevil767

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    kay, i will

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    nah you're doing good. it's i who need to improve.

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    ahh, i see...damn this helps a lot, thanks mate

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    i meant that as in 'when is the winter getting over?'

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    Hmm, I think you should have added a bit more reaction in the part where the Mc gets reincarnated...like it felt as if he accepted everything a bit too quickly

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    I read the first chapter after that i had to go for dinner😅

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời Hien_zado

    I see...i'll try to improve♥

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7675 months ago
    trả lời steeve

    16...

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago
     công bố

    In the beginning, God created the heavens and the earth. The earth was without form, and void; and darkness was on the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the face of the waters. Then God said, "LET BRO COOK" 🗣🔥🔥🔥

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  • LuciferTheDevil767
    LuciferTheDevil7676 months ago
    trả lời raja_kaleem

    no more what?

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