While Base of the Novel is good and story development is good. The MC is too cowardly and fears to be called a pirate. If I remember right in the novel you mentioned that MC has secne till Egg Head as he was searching for Elders Devil Fruits in the System Shop. If so why is being pus**. While I think the pricing is not well done I can't say anything as you might have it related to the plot of the novel. I have bit advice write the chapter titles instead of no. and a small synopsis will do a lot of good believe me. Overall Its a good novel, Had good start, Plor also seems nice enough, Writing is also good the only exception is MC cowardlyness. Anyway Good Luck I was the first one here and will be last one to be here even if the story goes good or bad I will be with you till end and support you my daily PS and don't let other please negative comments bother you if they criticize you take as lesson to improve.

*ship not island

Fist One here and I hope this will go a long way on this journey it has good start hope it continues. And Author ignore all negative comments without any way tell you how improve and juat insult you for the very sake of it. All the best. May God Bless you. Chao

+1

suace???

sauce

Yep Same Here. But like Universe gave him a chnace maybe Eve was also given a chance or recovered her memory of past at a later date or something like but continuing this neraarive is a no-no but like previous one said its OK to use the past for character development

Yep 🤣

I'm gonna take a leap of faith and a 5 star rating. Cause there aren't many fic about testament I see you have a good plotline in mind by auxiliary chapters. So all the best for your future adventures and please don't stop in the middle. oh and one more thing I have a sinple request if possible add Hasegawa Chisato in the harem

Bro you gotta add her bro

Hasegawa Chisato

Bro this one hell of a fic. Keep it going. It's one of its kind. Don't bother about those people who dis , insult, or criticize you with telling you ya to improve. You are doing exceptionally well for first time writer. Belive me I have not seen a new fic this good.

One Word to describe it "Perfect " By the way when are you going to update

bhawahaha nice one for Shishui power used correct for at least one time

Why isn't the topic of Ed's mom being involved/reason being kidnapped discussed at least with his father and aunt even if he has trauma it should be brought forward even if it was for short period of and not explored Man this becoming really annoying I get that u don't want talk about his mom but man at least when mentioned at least a brief expletives wouldn't harm any one it's really annoying

Why isn't the topic of Ed's mom being involved/reason being kidnapped discussed at least with his father and aunt even if he has trauma it should be brought forward even if it was for short period of and not explored Man this becoming really annoying I get that u don't want talk about his mom but man at least when mentioned at least a brief expletives wouldn't harm any one it's really annoying

TFTC

Too short of a chapter . Thanks for the Chapter

Too short of a chapter

Giving it a 5 star in hope that it would be a good fic and that the authors doesn't drop it .