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thank for the chapters. but i want more .
good potential
A good story so far, a great potential. MC is not too op, this is one of the best fanfic i read here. BUT does this story really need Harem ? MC is literaly an non humanoïde alien in his first form
Giorgio, a C rank hunter, a mage spécialised in curse (debuff), he is a coward and always run away first if the situation degenerate. He put poison on a hide dagger because he is paranoiïde. And search to learn the stealth skill in dark market. a pessimistic but amical. He look scary but is a coward
yeah, the story insist on the stongest hunter, who can bé in this situation. And this detail explain why they release monsters in human world. but 99% of the hunter are not a vessel for the leaders and monarchs.
The leader source of mana? bullshit except for some few S rank hunter who has shards of the leaders. The leader provoke invasion of monsters because with their death the mana within can awake human, who obtain a source of mana indépendant. Is said in the novel and manhua. But if this is a modification voluntary, for the AU , why not . sorry for my bad english
this is a bit too résumé for me,for exemple tame enough gryffon and pegase for a legion is huge, but you don't talk about the training of this beast for war and the soldier for learn to fly with them. This need some infrastructures, time, skill and craft for adapt the équipements. This is just a resume without any développement or personnality. But the idea has potential. A kingdom building is a difficult style of writing.
Yggdrasil coins, and martial arts ... Overlord ?
no... The Kekkai Genkai link to Otsuki are not a result of secrete techniques, but that appart every Kekkai Genkai can bé learned in theory with enough talent
this story has potential, i hope you don't drop.