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Gunkun

Gunkun

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2023-12-11 đã tham giaIndia
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời Hell1Born

    What can I say other then, he figured it out.

    What is happening, did we really get transported like this? This feels so out of the blue. Momonga
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời unseenpickle

    He acts that way because he respect Ainz authority as a GM

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời unseenpickle

    He doesn't Just knew they would be teleported.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời Quake_Midaro

    Though i have been told my pace is too slow, am trying to change that

    Ch 18 Chapter 17: Ainz's decision and Albedo's Resolve. (Rewriten)
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời Quake_Midaro

    hello author here, thanks for reading till now, but I have to ask. What do you mean by the Mc made stupid discussion, can you give me an example. Because I was writing it normally. (It can be because I just suck at this haha)

    Ch 18 Chapter 17: Ainz's decision and Albedo's Resolve. (Rewriten)
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    trả lời Gurnoor_Singh_4533

    Might have, but the image in my head was a healer and Toji ain't a healer, he is a killer.

    MC
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Solution
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Solution
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Albedo
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Albedo
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Yuri Alpha (Overlord)
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận

    In her full-gear

    Caenis (FGO)
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Akeno (DXD) 
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận
    Akeno (DXD) 
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun4mth
    bình luận

    Something like this

    MC
    Adventures of Lemon.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun5mth
    trả lời Garland

    Thanks, for your critical criticism. I can't do anything about the story feeling generic other than applying "Soul games logic". For Momonga and Lemon not having much interaction, that's intentional, as I do plan to tell Lemon's story. And more interaction between them will come in the next arc after this one. TK for the review though.

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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun5mth
    trả lời Siqui

    Isn't this character from Dive to Blue?

    Do you guys want mini sumt chapters? This will be between characters besides the main group, eg, like momonga× albedo. Their won't be much set-up, except for some reasoning, just smut.
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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun5mth
    trả lời Allpowerful

    Yep

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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun5mth
    trả lời Gunkun

    Ah, now I look stupid for not checking which paragraph you were talking about. Well, my explanation still stands

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  • Gunkun
    Gunkun5mth
    trả lời Allpowerful

    Ok, I am a bit confused by your statement. If you are talking about the NPCs created by Lemon then it's cause he added additional knowledge as he knew the transfer might happen(he was just not sure) and for the regular ones I don't remember adding anything like that, but hey I wrote chap 1-4 like 1 and half years ago so you might be right.

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