Keiou_Owlo

Honestly, he needs to stop mumbling. In a world with people with senses beyond human, one whisper at the wrong time and he's in trouble. Not even the mind is protected, imagine a whisper that even a normal human can hear if they try.

Just to let you know that there is a small error at the beginning of the chapter. It says there is a 4-year Time Skip, but the text itself says that only two years have passed. Just a small mistake, I think.

I think it's the Chinese version of Kumo

I honestly thought he was going to make her activate the Mangekyou somehow and make her face Fugaku saying that she wouldn't marry someone who was weaker than her or Minato. Then, she would talk to the other two girls to resolve this. But it doesn't mean that the way it was written is bad. Just... Unexpected, I would say. But it's very much the character's style.

I'm following it too. It's great.

Do you know what scene would be interesting to read? If, while they were on the bus to the Gym where the matches are held, Tsuna started singing the song "Shinunoga E-Wa". Showing that surprisingly he also knows how to sing. It would also be a way to give an indirect message to Shimizu.

I would train a lot of martial arts.

Option 1 was clearly better.

There's a small error in the story. I think it went unnoticed. How is he 6 years old, if the First Great Ninja War, where his parents died, ended more than 10 years ago? The math doesn't add up. It's impossible.

The story seems interesting so far. My only complaint is that it keeps switching from the character's point of view to a third person. It gets weird and confusing to read.