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  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx002 days ago
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    Is this a MTL or what? always wrong names the author is bias on girls, the author depicts the MC as a low key almighty being world class chef he can cook everything, he can make world class cuisine with ordinary ingredients also chinese foods in this story are all top class. Soma the MC of food wars become a trash side character because of Zane ruined the flow of original story. Also that bullshit midnight chef a young man defeating all world class chef with 5 years exp in cooking. He is just a damn prick criminal threatening the defeated chef with his knife. The characters of this story are dumb and stupid not reporting that damn midnight chef. Also all organization in this story want to recruit our Mc but always rejected cause he cant cook outside of his system base tavern. And Erina in this story getting more corrupted by reading 18+ manga like yosuga no sora unlike the food wars she always read pure romance manga.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx002 days ago
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    Author, Update the pokemon farmer dont drop it.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx002 days ago
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    The author can't accept criticism, all of his works have negative reviews so even though some of us enjoyed his novels. He easily discourage himself cause maybe he's scared for more criticism.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx006 days ago
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    I am planning giving this story a second chance to read, i did already dropped it. Can you guys spoil me, Did he caught his own pokemon? Did he become a pokemon trainer or what?

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx006 days ago
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    Author, Can you finish that detective conan fanfic? you already making a new story. All you made are on hiatus or dropped except this one.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx0023 days ago
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    Make a separate story about Ashtwo, and abra show, stop using them as a filler chapter. It is so annoying OG ash story getting shorter cause of filler chapters . Please stop ash rudely calling just there names like Oak,Jenny,Joy, please properly put their title beside there names. Originally pokemon made by Japanese. When Ash asking something they looks like 10 years old he is just calling there names damn so rude.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx00a month ago
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    Hey what happened? the story is so good but is this on hiatus or did he drop it?

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx003 months ago
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    A rip-off fan fic of LOTM if i didn't read the original story this will be good novel. 1. Medici become a kid out of nowhere in chapter 1 no explaination how did it happen, in LOTM he still sealed in a certain ruins. 2. Ancient Sun God still alive damn this is already in fifth epoch. 3. Mc is in Sequence 9 and Ince Zangwill a Sequence 5 Gatekeeper but Mc killed him instantly no explaination nor details how then stole the 0-08 Sealed artifact. 4. The mc is stupid , childish. This story is ridiculous too many info dump in early chapters. The comments are misleading. Sorry i will drop this shitty novel.

  • zxxxx00
    zxxxx004 months ago
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    I have a complaint about the translator can you please change Dragonite voice sounds?. It's damn frustrating to read 'Ouch' when everytime Naoki ask his Dragonite.

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