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mercurystarship

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Why did the starship break up with the comet? It needed space!

2023-11-26 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship23d
    trả lời Iseeyou

    Props to you! Keep putting in the hard work. My only suggestion is to read some well-written books and research how to improve writing characters and dialogues. You'll definitely get better over time.

    The 100: Sky King
    Ti vi · Iseeyou
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship23d
     công bố

    I'm not sure if the author will keep my review, but here it is: This story felt flat and uninspiring to me. The characters and writing seemed hollow and lacked depth. I've never seen 'The 100', so I don't know the characters, but what I read didn't make me want to keep going. I think the author has potential to improve.

    The 100: Sky King
    Ti vi · Iseeyou
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship23d
     công bố

    I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

    Robert I Baratheon
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship24d
     công bố

    Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.

    I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat
    Tranh châm biếm · FanFictionForge
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship30d
     công bố

    The idea behind it is interesting, but the way it's done isn't great. It's just okay, not amazing. Maybe give it a shot if you're out of other things to read.

    Naruto: My Relationship Book
    Tranh châm biếm · WizardKiki
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
    bình luận

    I suspect Magnus's suicide may have somehow played a role in the alteration of Van's passive skill, 'Untrusted'.

    'Ah... What's with these two...? I don't think they even wanted to touch me with a stick before...'
    Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord
    Kỳ huyễn · Hazy_0832
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
    bình luận

    ChatGPT FTW.

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord
    Kỳ huyễn · Hazy_0832
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
     công bố

    I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.

    Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord
    Kỳ huyễn · Hazy_0832
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
     công bố

    This DBZ fanfic is pretty solid. It's got a cool premise that I haven't seen much of before, which kept me hooked. Shoutout to the author for their work, and good luck to them! I'm gonna let some more chapters pile up before I jump back in.

    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Tranh châm biếm · OmniSpectra
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
    bình luận

    Seriously awesome stuff.

    Ch 54 The West Supreme Kai
    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Tranh châm biếm · OmniSpectra
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
     công bố

    This fanfic blew me away! It's hands down one of the best I've ever read on this site. Young Kenshin's interactions had me cracking up non-stop during the first two arcs. All in all, it's just an amazing story. Mad props to the author - you killed it! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for arc three. Bring it on!

    Souls in Teyvat
    Diễn sinh trò chơi · ARandomMob
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship1mth
     công bố

    So, I went into this Tonikaku Kawaii fanfic totally blind, with no clue about the anime. Zero expectations. I've only read the first 20 chapters, but here's the deal: the premise felt pretty cliche, and honestly, it was a bit of a letdown. Kinda reminds me of a typical Chinese fanfic. The interactions between the main guy and girl made me cringe a bit - feels like it was written by a teenage girl, lol. The chat group system was a nice touch, but there hasn't been much focus on that in these early chapters. Plus, the main character is already super OP from the get-go, so I'm not sure where the story's headed. Look, it's not really my thing, but hey, props to the author for putting their first fanfic out there on this platform. Best of luck to 'em!

    Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System
    Tranh châm biếm · SchadenFriday
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship2mth
     công bố

    This fanfic is totally awesome! It's such a refreshing read compared to a lot of the other stories on this site. The author has done a great job mixing characters from different universes together. I'm really excited to see where this story goes. Author, you're doing a fantastic job - keep it up!

    Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World
    Tranh châm biếm · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship2mth
    bình luận

    👍Keep Cooking !!!

    Ch 33 Chapter 33
    Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World
    Tranh châm biếm · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship3mth
    trả lời A_Real_Werewolf234

    Haha 😂 ! Just spotted your growing Patreon subscriber base - congrats, you totally deserve it! Keep up the amazing work. 👍

    (The multiple chapter days I have been doing are going to end soon. I have been talking with my Father and he is pushing me to start a Patreon. in this economy, even an old-school guy like my Father sees the benefit of some extra money from my hobby. I will see what I can do about starting a Discord as well.
    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Tranh châm biếm · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship3mth
    bình luận

    Totally cool with you having a Patreon, but just wondering, does your dad know what the MC pulled on his own dad? 😂😂

    (The multiple chapter days I have been doing are going to end soon. I have been talking with my Father and he is pushing me to start a Patreon. in this economy, even an old-school guy like my Father sees the benefit of some extra money from my hobby. I will see what I can do about starting a Discord as well.
    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Tranh châm biếm · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship3mth
    bình luận

    XD

    "This? Is not a boy, this is a man. It doesn't count." 
    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Tranh châm biếm · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship4mth
    trả lời Sith_Lord_P_Sheevy
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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship4mth
     công bố

    I honestly feel like I might not be getting the full genius of this story. It began on a high note but quickly became a bit messy, unpolished, and repetitive, just like another review mentioned. Even after 20 chapters, I'm struggling to catch on to the main hook or setup of the plot; it seems a bit scattered to me.

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  • mercurystarship
    mercurystarship4mth
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