Paradoxical_Primal

bro when is the new chapter?

was this 1 chapter, the quota for this month?

Great fanfic, please keep updating!!! need more mass update ..........................................................................................

who are in the harem?

the system in this one is really interesting but i must say, i personally havent understand why there is the antihero tag for this fic but otherwise its a good read.

well since the wives would likely become the 'author' of the story, they would likely increase the harem coz they dont like 'dense' 'blackhole' 'jp isekai' type of mc so i guess harem maybe big but not as big as Victor's harem.

i think his new story could be something like how featherine created the story of uminemo. the wives will likely write story and publish the book to there empire and likely someone 'random' will get in the 'White Universe' world. In a way the new novel would also be inside mtwabv greater cosmology.

hmm so its been nearly a month with no update. starting the little mizuki back story, the chapters finally become interesting to read after that last extra chapters u made. Then i saw a comment from you saying that u apparently rushed action so you couldn't develop characters in the harem properly, so why do you keep adding more and more women in the harem when you urself get overwhelmed by so many girls? I though as you are the author of the story, this novel should be the story YOU wanted to write, not what ur readers larp about all the time by adding this and that women. And on a side tangent, what's with your fixation with only women are strong, independent, warrior like, yadayada trait and always women supremacy over men, ofc that with your mc being the 'sole exception' as the only man which is ever so competent. There is no as such value u even provide with adding different girls, all of them have the same trash yandere wannabe trait but are complete failures in that regard. your progression was so good till diablo fight, which i am still salty about with how ridiculously you concluded that fight. i felt i just read a joke of a chapter but i looked past that and then you decided, yea its time to just throw away all standards of mc harem and did a stupid or*y and added 15 plus extra women in the harem just like that. And that wasn't the end, then you started the most garbo arc of samar and added an actual hoe in the harem and such a pity, you couldn't replicate the success of how you handled aphrodite part. Maya's existence after being added and turned into a blood dragon, she actually just amount to be less then Victoria did and she has been in the side line plot sice chapter 90 lul. Till this date, in my personal opinion, the greek war fight was the time, when the novel truly peaked and after that, you simply are unable to give a banger arc. Truthfully, elder god could have been peak, but with his akashic creation, the entire fight just became a useless time skip chore and a ridiculously huge powerup for victor which completely nullified all stakes of becoming stronger and cooler fights. Nowadays in the novel, Victor just passively awakens concepts of space and time, and just magically keep getting stronger without anything to actually show for it. You don't even explain his power sets properly, just yap about negativity, begin, madness, dream concepts and expect us to know everything about it. Madness is such an idiotic concept that victor has awakened, all the time he uses it, i can't even understand why is madness concept even used in this specific instance. Truly a bad job with explanation. I think the last truly unique concept u explained was nullity and after a long time later, u explained a bit about natalia eyes power. Man its really really too slow. If you cant show a concept being used properly, then atleast have the insight to give an info dump for ppl like me who actually give a sht about what his powers are and able to actually fathom what his actual capabilities are like. The issue i have with how novel is rn, isnt the chapter being filler or anything in particular, i have read some godawful chingchong shet with 1000's of chapter of pure filler arcs, this one doesnt have that issue, its the fact that author takes sooooo long to update one single chapter is truly killing my motivation to give a fuk about this novel. In one of the earlier comment u said you would do another month of fluff chapters to do some character development till u explain higher cosmology stuff, but that one month has sure become half a year with your absolutetrash update speed.. Welp i doubt you gonna read this anyway but yea at some point this novel was truly my fav one and for that reason alone i am giving it a five star, otherwise its an avg 3 star mid junk novel atm. Truly a pity. Hopefully this novel gets back on track and update but this author has worse communication with his readers then someone like mlb or xie. Also if you actually dont want to write, just say you have dropped the novel instead of being a jerk by letting readers have the option to keep paying for chapters which aint coming. Your privilege aint cheap dude, 50 usd for actual nothing from you stings quite a lot and once actual hate start building on your paid readers, they dont come back to get scammed again.

tru tru