losing braincells reading the first 3 chapters, so i stopped. grammar is bad, i don't even know what you are trying to say. sigh it's very bad. not deserving 5star with this kind of writing, so idk how u get 5 stars, this always happened to romance book, have high rating but it's not even that good of a book.

rough and tough to read

the FL is annoying af, like i said the mc just wasting time on her when she clearly don't like him back, and i hate this type of stupid drama. it feell sooo stupid, she not even special. she even likes some other guy, god. useless pathethic shtty drama.

how this stuff get so good of a rating? this novel is not even on the "mid" level, i don't get why someone would want to waste their time on someone who clearly doesn't like them one bit. the drama is ass, pathethic. and what u mean by mc is "eviler", evil ur mother.

u gotta be the dumbest f in id1iot in this novel, i pity your parents to have a failure like you, the world would be way better if you would just uninstall yourself. whoever have connections with u whether ur parents relatives and friends, they gotta be the unluckiest mfers on the planet.

yo, i feel like this nove will be filled with unnecessary drama, please tell me im wrong

love but 2.5?

i like this novel, enjoyable fun. and most importantly YANDERES!!

it's true that ur writing of this chapter cause a confusion, but not for me, why? cause im smart. muahahahahaa. jokes aside it's not that bad tho.

ew novel, plot is so-so. or maybe it's bad. this novel is a novel about game, mmorpg, but there's literally nothing about the game stuff. there's no status screen, no attribute, no item's description, no leaderboard, no shop, even there's nothing about the scenery of the game, there's literally almost 0 game elements in the novel? very very poorly written. world building as shtty too. i mean if there's a technology as good as the vr one might assume that the world they're in are futuristic af, but no, it never been mentioned any sort of futuristic technology except for the VR aspect. it's like there's 0 effort by the author. and then the harem, their relationship are very very shallow, the girls were like love the mc without any reason or something, it's like they're collectively just love him suddenly. and it's not even clear whether the mc love any of them or not, they just having sex it's like friends with benefits, there's no real relationship, and it's poorly written too, like after mc hooked up with one girl and just move to another without deepening their relationship or smtng. it feels shallow. and then R-18 scenes, they are sometimes were well written, clear, detailed, hot and fun. but at other times it's so badly wriiten it's like very rushed, and sometimes the interaction feel like npc-like kind of interaction. there's still so much to say but i'll move on to another thing, the mc's EX she a psycho, she cheated on mc and then wanted him back, she very toxic and manipulative, she incredibly stupid, and 400 chapters in the drama between mc and ex are still on going. and she has reverse harem too. it's very annoying. fight scenes, they're all mid, just the same stuff nothing to note. and then the EVENTS in the game, they're all just the same thing? just keep on repeating the same event. wtf? it's just the same kind of event over and over and over again.

for real, it's like there's 0 effort from the author. why make a novel about games, when there's almost 0 game elements in it.

nah i hate this, if she didn't die with qin chen im dropping this, and officially this novel will be the absolute trash in the universe

at least don't make it cliche asf y'know

this novel is one of the first novel i've ever read, at the time i don't really care much about details like plot, characters, or anything like that as long as the grammar is good i'll just read it. and at the time i was really enjoyed this novel very much. and well since i don't remember much, i can only say that it's a very pleasant read at least for me.

i agree, but if you're here only for the game genre then it should be fine to read, if you didn't care that much about the other little details beside the game aspect.

5 stars? how? either the reviewers are braindead or they're not real, haha. this novel is straight up TRASH. It got the dumbest plot that's generic as fk, the characters are trash not even the mc is interesting, just some generic protagonist that's dumb as fk, but every tthing will work out fine for him even tho hes dumb asf why? cause of the Plot Armor hell yeah the plot armor is so thicc like gyatt dammn, everything is so forced, so forced. hhahahahaa how can someone come up with something so stupid. even a story written by a 12 yo would be better than this crap of an abomination of a novel thats worse than garbage. this literally the dumbest novel i've ever read in a while, better rename this novel to "Braincell Destroyer". hahahahahhahaa it's a fitting name i tell you. yo author serious talk, if you genuinely feel proud of this novel of yours, you better go checkup on some therapist, doctors, cops, or whoever that can help you, cause for sure youre mentally ill

anddddd guess what? seems like author never reads comment lol, well usually dumb id1iot person wouldn't want to listen to others, cuz it will hurt their little bitty bit of ego

crazy hypocrisy but eh whatever im a hypocrite too

yo author, did you ever read the comments?

well, he is american so it might be different. and he's a transmigrated person. if it were me i also couldn't respect some stranger so suddenly y know.