Writer hoping to one day be able to adapt my novels into manga (drawn by me).
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Best chapter yet, develops Yoel and is very interesting
Leaving my review after reaching chapter 20. The World's Consequence is definitely unique to what this platform has to offer, it breaks away from the common tropes and trends established and in turn provides an engaging story. Its world, while still remains to be unveiled to me, appears wide and detailed even though it would be considered sci-fi. While it remains one of the few novels able to keep me interested in reading further, its bland characters drag the story, often times prompting me to stop reading. However, this novel still has room to improve and has been steadily doing as such. Glad to keep reading and waiting to see what it has offer.
Nice to see more enigmas
They said they didn't know his name earlier?
Observation Haki
Boy? I thought only lilith had an enigma. . 🤨
Finally, gore [img=recommend]
There is no reason the girl would look to Yoel of all people. This is just embarrassing 🤨🤨
Agreed
The first chapters [Spefically Chapter 1 & 3] are a bit choppy when it comes to grammar but that quickly gets resolved by the introduction of the 4th chapter. The world has been painted beautifully from the start and the characters are vibrant and joyful. It really feels like the world is real and the rural aspect of it is described in a serene way like a slice of life anime. The way the novel is progressing, it's only gonna get better.