A very cliché setting

¡Gracias por tu comentario en mi novela! Quisiera entender mejor a qué te refieres con "pago pero por favor incluye el caso en español en el patrón o haz otro". ¿Podrías explicar con más detalle lo que quieres decir con "el caso en español en el patrón"? ¿Te gustaría que incluyera algún elemento específico en español en la historia, o te refieres a otra cosa? ¡Muchas gracias por tu ayuda! Tus comentarios son muy valiosos para mí.

Interesting story concept. The writing of this novel is not too bad, compared to most other beginners. As for the characters, they are not yet clearly visible, but the general idea can be seen. The story elements are good, overall it is a story worth reading if the author continues to write this novel.

Interesting story, I must admit that this story is worth reading, I hope this story can continue.

Senin annen kim, dostum?

It's already updated! Want to quickly update your power stone at least, friend!

Maybe? Or maybe not?

Bilmiyorum, belki yaparım, belki yapmam? Ancak dostum, ben de gelecek hikayenin böyle bir hikayeye sahip olup olmayacağından emin değilim, çünkü kendim bile bir sonraki olayı belirlemekte oldukça zorlanıyorum

I'm sorry, because previously I was going to have a school exam. I couldn't update for a very, very long time. This time I can finally be active again by creating a new novel. You can see my profile to check the novel. I mean, once again, sorry to have disappointed you.

Good writing quality, very good to read, and has a unique writing style. The updates have been quite stable so far. The story development is good and interesting to read further. The character design is very captivating and makes you want to read further. The background of the world is very unique, initially strange, but as the story progresses, it becomes clearer and more interesting to read further.

An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!

An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!

An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!

Good Luck Bro!

Good Job Bro!

Good job!

Nice

Good

Good

An interesting and very unique story, the portrayal of the characters is somewhat strange but good, yes, this is a pretty good story, the writing style is not the best, but it is decent compared to beginners in general, it can be said that this can still be developed, and worth reading!