Death_Simulation
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Death_Simulation2dtrả lời Genesis_writerCh 44 Chapter 44- Secret Selected Race Horse- Death_Simulation5dtrả lời AsuraNineThoughtsCh 66 Chapter 66- Hungry Arc
- Death_Simulation6dtrả lời HADGH
its great you tried humor it was perfect.
On the Ewaria Continent, there was the magical thing known as cultivation, a path to immortality! At least that was what most of the people had said laid on the end of the path... - Death_Simulation6dtrả lời evius
Ofcourse.
Now about the Nascent Soul Realm... In simple terms, it was an extremely powerful realm. Even across the entire Heavenly Sky Kingdom that the Flying Sword Sect was located inside of, the Nascent Soul Realm was the peak. - Death_Simulation9dtrả lời Unit29
Yogesh is just a part of this few chapters. He is not further in the story. At least read the free chapters and give some complete feedback which I can take as a lesson to improve on.
"I would love to work on the Job you would find me but I already got one. I went to the City today, and there I met someone at the railway station who was looking odd for some reason. We got into a conversation and he was impressed by my thoughts on the science. Then he gave me a job with some money in advance while taking my number." Arc said while being a little nervous because he knows that there are many flaws in his said part but he could not find any other reason to explain the money and especially if he gave some pale reason like winning the lottery then he would have to find more reason for more money he would have earned, which would have been much more suspicious. - Death_Simulation9dtrả lời
Mc is not ripping anybody, it is others who is ripping him off and it all make sense when you completely thrown alone in whole different world. But I appreciate your feedback. Thank you for being a part of this book.
"I would love to work on the Job you would find me but I already got one. I went to the City today, and there I met someone at the railway station who was looking odd for some reason. We got into a conversation and he was impressed by my thoughts on the science. Then he gave me a job with some money in advance while taking my number." Arc said while being a little nervous because he knows that there are many flaws in his said part but he could not find any other reason to explain the money and especially if he gave some pale reason like winning the lottery then he would have to find more reason for more money he would have earned, which would have been much more suspicious. - Death_Simulation9dtrả lời Unit29
Sir, there is saying in Punjabi and let me translate it for you, that in times of needs, tou even have to make donkey your father. Heheh 🤭
"Of course, it is included in the deal. So, I think this deal is good enough for today but if you want to make another deal in future, you can come to me." Yogesh said, when saying this, he had an unusual glint of seriousness in his eyes. - Death_Simulation10dtrả lời AsuraNineThoughtsCh 64 Chapter 64- Destroyed by his own self
- Death_Simulation12dtrả lời IsekaidFred
It have technology of modern world but no high level weapons, no Ai or other sci fi things, but I does have phones and laptops. Yeah, that’s it.
"Result of my body forging were not up to level to pass. What do I do…" - Death_Simulation12dtrả lời IsekaidFred
- Death_Simulation12dtrả lời IsekaidFred
- Death_Simulation12dtrả lời IsekaidFred
- Death_Simulation15dtrả lời Monarchz
Will later be known in the story.
[Ding~ The transfer has been completed. The number of participan is 2 million.] - Death_Simulation16dtrả lời EmberWyldes
But check the place where they discovered it. It teleportation facility which might cost million sir billliona to build.
"Your scan is complete, you can now leave if you want, that lift will take you to the surface." The man explained and left after seeing that there was nothing abnormal detected in that scan. - Death_Simulation16dtrả lời EmberWyldes
Are you sure about your thoughts, because some time ago, you were calling it a very little money while hating on yogesh. 🫢🫢🫢🫢🫢
"Your scan is complete, you can now leave if you want, that lift will take you to the surface." The man explained and left after seeing that there was nothing abnormal detected in that scan. - Death_Simulation16dtrả lời EmberWyldes
Well, then increase your patience level because in future story, he will a important character to the story.
"Of course, it is included in the deal. So, I think this deal is good enough for today but if you want to make another deal in future, you can come to me." Yogesh said, when saying this, he had an unusual glint of seriousness in his eyes.