Yonatan_Ketema

can you be more shameless hm the writing is medicare at best you have mc with huge ego non-natural relationship with family ( like saying that grandpa this grandpa why not use their own name ,give them time to develop than rushing it who was mc ,his former parents (if he have ) what was the former world what kind of person was he his age before to know his maturity no world building not character development (mother father who are they no real conversation ) not great power system AND. absolutely illogical thought system of characters father leaving for many years and act like it's normal at reunion his mother an dmaids not noticing his difference its'sjust saddenningbut hey it's web novel as long as you have the fake audience it will make you king better start to proof read and REALLY read other best authors work like shadow slave ( cuz writing is good world building etc..) ,Atticus odyssey too p.s don't delete this one too though[img=disgusted]

author arent' you making Julia so disrespectful hm???

Trash that the only word I have for the disgusting simp MC who has no self respect at all I mean hard time makes people more strong/broken emotionally but the are people who will be strong due to trauma MC as a person who has seen worse should've strived more to learn about werewolves and make his mind sharp but not be stupid who cause genocide because of it he at least should've been smart by watching the way he himself lost his sanity he could understand what that werewolf did but having no sharp mind but also simp to women than a revenge driven personality due to his past trauma . he needs hard work personality i mean dude is so hurt that he See's the massacre scene of his parents after so many years yet he has time to dillydally with nonsesnse?

there isn't much work on the novel it's fast paced

since when did marriage get started because your wife felt pity for her friend and want to help her huh? it wasn't clearly stated what he felt I mean just being ignorant and saying ok you know this isn't marriage he must've stated at least his wife needs to talk such things privately not like some announcement.

Author will please continue it it's Great work it's been a year at least I expect you to give us nee chapters in 2024.

um author I think 11 months waiting is far more than many readers can get patient I mean if the novel is not to your expectations I don't know but as a reader who read the 801 chapters you mustn't Leave it like this it doesn't deserve it

Respect author for such great creativity it's nice , interesting cool and many thanks 🙏[img=update]