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Daoist_cool

Daoist_cool

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2023-09-06 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_coola year ago
     công bố

    This book has a great story that keeps you interested.

  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_coola year ago
    bình luận

    Anything is okay but if a guy is emotionally attached to someone for 3 years and suddenly getting separated is not something that can be ignored. Author you didn't give a MC any character. lack of depth in MC's character won't show any prospects to novel, even more if it's first chapter.

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  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_coola year ago
     công bố

    The start was good even with many grammar mistakes and sometime currency mistakes.But after MC killed nephew of Godfather, novel went from streaming with system cheat and making money to full time supernatural powers activities with little to no use of appraisal powers. even when fighting MC will use appraisal after being forced back in the corner. The writing style changed too much because of AI based editing. It kills the wibe and makes the situation unnecessarily deep with forced big synonyms words, it just feels forced.

  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_coola year ago
    trả lời RAMINATOR

    The author just changed everything after killing the nephew of the Godfather. he went from streaming with a system cheat novel to a supernatural powers action genre.

  • Daoist_cool
    Daoist_coola year ago
     công bố

    here for good read and that's just what I got.

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