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Tokyo_Ru

Tokyo_Ru

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  • Tokyo_Ru
    Tokyo_Rua year ago
     công bố

    Wanted to give the plot and the story a chance , but like i give to it like 30 chances, After reading 1200 trash chaps Trash writer, always downgrading the mc, making a underdog for most of the 90% of the story, could have been understood if only once or 3 , but to many times Mc have to fight on the edge , and always againts imposible odds, the divine bitch etc etc , if you are a Maso u will end liking this trash book. Worse the girl stolen from mc issue is no solved after 1200 chaps, so trash shiter writer fuking his own story, as always their genre does, could have been 10000 times better but nope. Add tras writer , throwing the mc to the next roll of truble and issues , withouth solving the ones before, and repeat time after time, it add and keeps adding to MUCH. TRAS PIECE OF 2 BIT WRITER 60 of the text is like trash dna, of no use to over express, thing and stuf. Harem there is no real haren after 1200 chapters, only hugs and tease , piece xxxx writer So this is botton of the trash bin writer. If you like it be my guest

  • Tokyo_Ru
    Tokyo_Rua year ago
     công bố

    90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine. Premise was fine then , 2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this. And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf