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Chiefnaoto3452dbình luậnThis mc is terrible. I’ve been scimming through this fanfic. Thank god I didn’t take my time to read this
The whole thing was blown way out of proportion in my opinion. I know the incident could have been worse, but it could have been avoided altogether had I not acted like an asshole in the locker room. I really don't like talking to kids because of this reason because I come off as a tad superior to them.- Chiefnaoto3453dbình luận
I don’t understand why authors feel the need to almost copy and paste the whole og plotline and add a few things that don’t change the plot really at all and then call it a fanfic. Smh
'Oh come on! What invesetigation?! All you have to do is ask like five people here and they'll all tell you the same thing! It won't even take five minutes!' I was getting a little frustrated, but if I did anything bad to them, it would go against our goal of coming here and Dwargon would look at us unfavorably. - Chiefnaoto3453dbình luận
Yea imagine an elite jonin about to be kage level gets outplayed by 3 rouge chunin…. I seriously don’t even know why I’m continuing to read this I’m dropping
'Does the plot really have to be so melodramatic…' Logan couldn't help but feel helpless at this turn of events. In the end, he could only retreat to a distance of nearly twenty meters. - Chiefnaoto3458dbình luậnCh 5 The Regret- 5
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I hate when mc’s go out of their way and almost suck up to other people just cause he needs their “help” but actually really doesn’t and can just go his own way but plot demands that mc gets on good terms with main characters of the verse. I bet in 20 chapters from now he’s gonna be a justice league member smh
As he stared out at the blue planet below, he couldn't help but feel a sense of longing. This world, though different, held a beauty of its own. Perhaps, in time, he could find a place here, if only temporarily. But first, he had to prove himself, to show that he was not the enemy they feared. - Chiefnaoto34513dbình luậnCh 36 Would you like to see the second volume of this story?
- Chiefnaoto34522dbình luậnCh 20 Chapter 20
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Yes
Would you guys like to see a sequel to this story? - Chiefnaoto3451mthtrả lời Isaiah_Warner
Facts
Howard, leaning against a console, quipped dryly, "Well, I guess we're dead. It's been horrible knowing each and every one of you..." - Chiefnaoto3451mthbình luận
Good I’ve seen too many fanfics like that👍
(A/N: Just to be clear, this won't be a kingdom-building story. There may be moments like this where that's mentioned, but it will never be the focus.) - Chiefnaoto3452mthbình luận
Bruh. Our whole class got white belts in 5th grade just by participating in gym class. That’s not something to even mention
During middle school, I learned some taekwondo, even reaching the white belt, so my body wasn't in the worst shape. However, since entering this school, I had been completely neglecting exercise, so my endurance was fairly low. - Chiefnaoto3452mthtrả lời OzenndetailThrough the Looking Glass (Magi x Naruto) (Sinbad x Sakura) crossoverTranh châm biếm · Katsura_369
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I hate when authors makes an op mc suddenly weak and stupid for plot reasons. It shows lazy writing or just bad writing.
And checked the situation after getting a good look, and I found the situation not in my favour because things already reached to her brain and if I tried to do anything then it might harm her or even worse she might die - Chiefnaoto3452mthbình luận
Nah that bs
"Master…" Heard Grayfia calling but suddenly, that thing out of my hand, slipped away which should have been impossible and then launched itself towards Grayfia which is fast enough for it to reach her body before I could even catch it - Chiefnaoto3452mthbình luận
Im starting to wonder if this is the type of story where mc acts differently for plots sake.
The fury was back in full swing. I glared at the droid which had helped Grievous to escape and flung my right hand at it. It rose in the air with its limbs flailing uselessly around. I made a gripping motion with my fist and its arms and legs became taut. One by one its limbs were twisted away from the struggling machine. When only its torso remained the robot gave off a piteous whine before being squashed into a football sized sphere. - Chiefnaoto3452mthtrả lời warheight
man all I saw was mc struggling to kill grevious. If he was playing with him he would be laughing and evading everything but he almost got killed twice and was blinded by anger half the time
That fucking tin can escaped, damn it all to hell! - Chiefnaoto3452mthbình luận
Exactly what I was talking about. One minute he’s an experienced sith and knows every battle tactic and the next he acts like a 19 year old anakin who’s impulsive, narrow minded and can’t pay attention to anything but the thing in front of him. It’s very frustrating. Should have just made the god give mc force powers if he was gonna be like this not have him as an experienced sith LORD and have him pretty much say this era is a simple for someone like me from the old republic and then struggles his first battle and making decisions someone like a sith apprentice blinded by anger and arrogance would
"Damn it I should start paying attention! That is the hangar of a Separatist ship! Of course there will be vultures inside!" I grumbled to myself. I was acting impulsively without thinking through my actions. It was good think that Skywalker was not around to see me! The kriffing Jedi would have had a field day at my expense after the chat we had earlier. - Chiefnaoto3452mthbình luận
This whole story from start to finish has been a massive disappointment… Mc is complete trash as a person and character. He’s arrogant, retarted, he acts like he knows everything but when it comes to crucial moments he shows his real self as just a stupid arrogant narcissistic person. He’s had 1000 years and doesn’t learn martial arts at all in a word full of ninjas. He’s shown to be incompetent from the start. I was excited for an insert mc with anos powers but everything shown so far has completely ruined that concept
Ch 9 Overcoming Destruction