nekrom1
well, I am 18 years old, and I started my first time writing in the august of 2023 on this platform, so I ask if you like it give me support then I guess.
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he got his priorities straight
ohh so this is what he had done.
they are dancing because they can't take out a "Tear"
Author really making his own happiness.
I don't know I just can't get a 'Tear' from this sad story.
hmm, the character name is really unique
I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too. The only noticable problems would be that after some chapters, there are very long paragraphs in the chapter, which you know sometimes can feel bad. And some words or phrases seems repetitive or it could be for the story and it only felt to me. other then these min or things story is really great and of course the release rate is good.
Sorry, to all my readers for the chaotic week of not publishing chapters, I was busy with my Maternal Grandfather's funeral and funeral rituals, and because of this, I couldn't get the time and proper mind to write, from now on updates will be consistent like before, sorry again. Hope you keep reading my work.
Yeah he was my inspiration 😹