Nafiz_Aditya

New Chapter?

300 power stones are done, new chapter please.

I like the concept of the story but the execution is quite bad.The pacing is too fast. The author doesn't add enough detail to make anything actually Impact me and because of this the story is like a huge info dump. It would have been much better if the author to the time to add more detail and flesh out the scenes properly so it doesn't feel hollow.