IrisGood

It's a good story, a good world, very good characters (especially Theos), and a fairly constant publication pace. What more can I ask for? Excellent! The MC is a villain, but one who cares about his harem; for now, it's Alice and Luna, and by the looks of it, he's going to grow even more. The MC is someone quite ruthless but loving to his loved ones; he's quite powerful, the greatest genius of the generation. Also, there are a lot of mysteries and quite interesting ones. I hope the author keeps up the great work!

Tftc

It's a great read; I'm liking it pro now, even though it didn't take many chapters. I have a question, though, author: did your other novel abandon it? It's a novel I liked, "My Family In The Novel?"

NTR? Netori? Really brother, NTR sucks

la abandonaste hermano?

Honestly, as far as I'm going in the novel, I'm loving it. The story has a good pace, a little slow, but it feels natural and fluid how it's progressing, I like that. The updating is steady, with two chapters a day, sometimes up to five a day, depending, so great point there. So far it's been made clear that the world where the MC reincarnates is very large. Regarding the writing, maybe it's the most flow of the novel, but at least for me, it's not confusing to read, I see it as decent and readable, plus the author has already confessed that he's going to improve this section by taking advanced studies and buying Grammarly Premium, so, I have faith that it will be solved with time. Nova currently can be considered a very human MC, he suffers in killing but he knows it is necessary, he has all kinds of emotions in a few chapters. Overall, I like the book. Honestly, video game-themed books are my weakness, but this book I think does a lot of sections very well. I'm not a picky reader either, so, I recommend giving it a chance until at least 40+ chapters in. More more more more and more, keep it up, author!

I can only say: Great story. I like The Harem and hope this one develops well, it has quite a bit of potential and the writing/grammar is decent, the novel is very enjoyable, so overall I like it and it's very interesting. Keep it up, author!

I must admit that I loved the ending.... I thought Kamael had changed, that he was softer now, but Wow, what a surprise, he's even more ruthless than I thought hahaha..... Good chapter.

Well, by chapter 12, which I'm reading, the combat is very good, the grammar is decent, neither too good nor too bad.The characters are interesting, the MC so far I've liked it quite a bit. Recommended.

Author please come back 😭