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BlueCactusE

BlueCactusE

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    I heartily approve of Ping'An's precautions! "Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean they aren't after you." - from Joseph Heller's "Catch 22" novel.

    Ch 39 Chapter 23: A Thousand-Mile Escape [Vote for/Plead for Votes and Favorites]
    Immortal Father
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    Is the formation blocking everyone from going back to the sect via the tokens or just those near where she came from? 🤔

    Ch 38 Chapter 22: The Celestial Descends [Second of Three Updates, Vote Please!]
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    It's nice that he has a friend, from before his father's luck, etc., was known.

    Ch 37 Chapter 22: The Celestial Descends [Three Updates, Vote Please!]
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    Thanks for the chapter. There is a large number of weird typos in this chapter, with extra letters, missing spaces, etc.

    Ch 31 Training for Selection Exams, Part 2
    The Prodigy System
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    If thousands die during an exam, then no wonder they don't have enough fighters for the war. 🤪

    Amir and Ariel stood surprised, a minute ago they were training and now Ihaan stepped back from training them. It was a shock to them, Ariel had a vague image of Selection Exams. Hee thought killing wouldn't be allowed, nor would they be getting hurt in the Selection exams. Little did he know the ways of Quwahar are cruel and merciless. But, he was learning and he had no purpose other than following whatever destiny holds for him. 
    The Prodigy System
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    pouting -> pouring

    Ariel grabbed Amir's hand and hurled him towards Ihaa with a spinn. In mid-air, Amir took out a knife and after pouting some Djinn energy in it he threw it. The knife was well aimed on Ihaan's forehead but just an inch away, he caught it. "You used Weight Increase to make it heavy. Impressive, but" He threw the knife aside. "I am not that easy to take down," 
    The Prodigy System
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    Ihaa -> Ihaan spinn > spin

    Ariel grabbed Amir's hand and hurled him towards Ihaa with a spinn. In mid-air, Amir took out a knife and after pouting some Djinn energy in it he threw it. The knife was well aimed on Ihaan's forehead but just an inch away, he caught it. "You used Weight Increase to make it heavy. Impressive, but" He threw the knife aside. "I am not that easy to take down," 
    The Prodigy System
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    spot of -> spot on

    "Only three days, and then Selection Exams will be starting and you are nowhere near the level to pass." Ihaan closed his eyes and put on a blindfold, "Let's see if you can hit me with my eyes closed. It's getting boring, kicking your ass for four days is like a black spot of my awesomeness." Ihaan stood up, "Come at me now."
    The Prodigy System
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    pain,n, -> pain,

    "I sometimes think about a life, where I could sleep and not feel thirst, pain,n, and hunger, but I just can't imagine it. It's like my body has forgotten what it means to live without pain, where I don't want to eat or drink, where I can sleep." Ariel looked at Amir and slowly stood up.
    The Prodigy System
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    Heregrettedd -> He regretted

    "Just a little nap and then I'll go home. You should sleep too--" Amir looked at Ariel. Heregrettedd the second those words came out of his mouth. "Oh, sorry I forgot." Ariel pulled his body up and sat down on the green grass, "I chose it, at every turn I was given a choice. I chose to stay here rather than go back to my world with new memories and a new family and then I was given two choices again, live a life of restlessness and pain or life with no emotions, no feelings whatsoever."
    The Prodigy System
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    heart,t -> heart,

    "But, I can't back down. That common didn't give up even after he took those massive blows. I won't give up, never." He thought to himself. Even though he didn't respect him or accept him as a comrade, he always thought of him as trash, but in his heart,t Zayan had earned a place. He thought of Zayan as an insertion. The same thing crossed Ariel's mind as well.
    The Prodigy System
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    Ariellayd - Ariel

    The sunlight was shining in the sky, Amir and Ariel threw everything they had and more. But, Ihaan bashed them nearly drowned them, almost chopped Amir in half,f and was once or twice midway in killing them. The blanket of darkness had fallen over the sky, and Amir and Ariellayd were on the ground. Gasping for air, too tired to move. "Are you done, already?"
    The Prodigy System
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    half,f -> half,

    The sunlight was shining in the sky, Amir and Ariel threw everything they had and more. But, Ihaan bashed them nearly drowned them, almost chopped Amir in half,f and was once or twice midway in killing them. The blanket of darkness had fallen over the sky, and Amir and Ariellayd were on the ground. Gasping for air, too tired to move. "Are you done, already?"
    The Prodigy System
    Kỳ huyễn · Shehrax019
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    Eldri's waepon,n -> Eldris' weapon,

     "Silat Warriors?" Ariel asked. Ihaan sat down on the ground. "It's like an organization that catches criminals who have committed crimes like using forbidden techniques, experimenting on Aurians, and stealing Eldri's weapon,n and on and on goes this list. They come and get you themselves and then pass judgment as well, they are here what you call Law in your world."
    The Prodigy System
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    If there are forbidden techniques, they need to warn the kids. After all, their current instructions are to go and experiment.

    Ch 30 Training For Selection Exams
    The Prodigy System
    Kỳ huyễn · Shehrax019
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    and the in -> and then into

    "Of course it's you, who else can it be," Footsteps approached them, Ihaan turned back and smile that the man. "Anus, are you here to fight?" Anus was wearing a metal armor around his chest. "I am here, because I sensed a technique that is forbidden and ratted S class has been used here." Anus came near Amir, "Who casted it?" He asked plainly, Amir looked down to the ground and the in Anus' eyes. "I did it, it was an accident."
    The Prodigy System
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    smile that the man -> smiled at the man

    "Of course it's you, who else can it be," Footsteps approached them, Ihaan turned back and smile that the man. "Anus, are you here to fight?" Anus was wearing a metal armor around his chest. "I am here, because I sensed a technique that is forbidden and ratted S class has been used here." Anus came near Amir, "Who casted it?" He asked plainly, Amir looked down to the ground and the in Anus' eyes. "I did it, it was an accident."
    The Prodigy System
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    😅 😂 Ihaan is so crazy.

    Amir pointed at his clothes, "Why are you not wet?" Amir asked with suspicion and curiocity. "Because I am just awesome, water won't dare touch my awesomeness and my awesome cloths. Rejoice, you have witnessed the power of Great Ihaan, The God of Awesomeness."
    The Prodigy System
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    curiocity-> curiosity

    Amir pointed at his clothes, "Why are you not wet?" Amir asked with suspicion and curiocity. "Because I am just awesome, water won't dare touch my awesomeness and my awesome cloths. Rejoice, you have witnessed the power of Great Ihaan, The God of Awesomeness."
    The Prodigy System
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    nor I ever -> nor have I ever

    "He will be alright." Ihaan appeared in front of them, Ariel stood next to Amir who was lying on the ground coughing and getting water out from his system. "Who taught you that technique?" Ihaan asked with a smile, Amir inhaled and exhaled abnormaly. "I learned it myself," He answered. Ihaan turned back, "Get up and don't use that Prodigy again, it's a forbidden technique because it is not possible to master and many have died and killed their teammates in persiut of mastering this technique." Ariel looked at Amir, "I have been training with you, you never talked about this technique nor I ever saw you using it or practicing it."
    The Prodigy System
    Kỳ huyễn · Shehrax019
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