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- ENDWALKER1dbình luậnCh 70 Important Announcement
- ENDWALKER12dbình luận
muah haaahaaa
"Nononono! My heart is not prepared for that yet! You go first!" The redheaded goddess sent Tsubaki ahead while blushing at the thought of seeing Nox again making her subordinate smile wryly until she rushed her to leave. - ENDWALKER12dcông bố
Author I'm sure a decent number of ppl will come to read and it is up to you make the pace a little slow and give meaningful plot (whats with the sudden attack of other alpha?,why gloss it over as small matter)make characters have depth. you have time on your hands to improve as it's just starting out.May the creativity be with u.
- ENDWALKER22dbình luận
as little as possible
3 female partners (Already have them picked in mind) - ENDWALKER23dbình luận
this
2-> No secondary characters, just DxD(this comes to be highly explanatory, but I will comment, if you choose this route, it will be just Ban.-., without any force behind it, or without any organization, this can make some interactions with characters) - ENDWALKER1mthtrả lời ENDWALKERCh 38 Chapter 38
- ENDWALKER1mthbình luậnCh 38 Chapter 38
- ENDWALKER1mthbình luận
Like this
I prepare myself for another argument when I suddenly feel a chill down my spine and feel a gauntleted hand grab my shoulder, I slowly turn my head around and all I see are two glowing red embers surrounded by blackness. - ENDWALKER1mthbình luận
he says to be loyal and is now Justin kissing cheeks of a girl who he knows if addicted to him through mate bond ,Author it's Tim me to get your head out of your behind. Don't spit out words of don't mean them
The table was quiet at his confession since they all knew it was true, they still remembered when he tore into those other vampires, hell he even made them bleed which he still hasn't told them how. Rosalie was working her jaw as her glare was set on him, he found it cute the way she was glaring at him. - ENDWALKER1mthbình luận
this right here is first strike, may abandon this is mc acts stupid once more
She nodded as they both got into the back, Ryan gave the address to his parents apartment in the city as the cab took off. - ENDWALKER1mthcông bố
- ENDWALKER1mthbình luận
yeah, no world hopping it's for talentless authors who have no skill, try to stay in comic universe and if u can increase story with meaningful interaction.I am not alone in saying that the moment u make it world hopping u will lose a lot of readers.
Someone suggested Kevin take breaks for world hopping to places like Marvel to learn dimensional magic and absorb dimensional energies and even visit Bleach to show Ichigo that he too can be a man of many races if he wants to which Kevin currently is since he has chromastone, Technomorph, Kineceleran and spoilers Necro****** from the latest chapter. - ENDWALKER1mthbình luận
I'm done,u ruined it
I have also made the chat-group thing from the first chapter sound a lot more ambiguous, after reading some comments and thinking for a bit, the chat-group idea will either be heavily modified, or completely replaced. What I can guarantee is that there will be world-hopping 100%