ElectricWrites

It will be confusing to understand at first. But there is purpose to that which is explained way further into the story.

I try my best not to answer comments with any type of hostility bc I wanna avoid unnecessary drama. I know that there's some reader's who's replies are pretty passive-aggressive without the intention of being aggressive. But idk when is that, so I hesitate a lot and sometimes end up doing hasty actions bc I couldn't control myself. But now that I know you actually meant, I'm relieved. I'll keep in mind the way you express yourself. You can comment as much as you want, I would prefer a question, in case anyone has any confusion going on in the early stages of a story I started just because I was bored. I'm glad I didn't get hostile with you. I really like to communicate with people who take an interest in my stuff, as newbie as it is. Thanks for clarifying. And have a great day/night.

Things aren't what you think they have been said to be. Keep that in mind.

Well, I do have a plan for that part. Though, it won't be revealed until way~ later. You should start noticing some "odd" things when you continue reading. If you would tolerate my inexperienced with writing by the first season. Which I hope you do.

This was one of the mistake I made when reading back when I was just "Doing this for fun". I should've made the Marvel characters that are very intuitive noticed that Karito just seemed very "out of place". But I just did that later instead, which I just said to myself "Mistakes where made, but oh well..."

This ability does sound cool. I just wished I knew more before starting this whole thing.

It took me a bit to read everything you wrote, and I do appreciate you not being cruel to me, which is usually the case. I will confess that I started this story randomly because I was bored. I was very insecure about my writing, so I did use AI to fix most of the grammar errors I did, it's isn't after Volume 2 or Season two that I've gained a bit more experience and decided to actually commit to this story, one that I just started as a way to have fun. And most of the things you've said make sense, I was inexperienced, and I still somewhat am. But I wish for more advice on how to be better to deliver ya'll a fun story that doesn't have as much stuff that doesn't make sense, like a few of the parts in season 1. But I'm still trying my best and I'll take your advice and try my best.

I'll take my time to build it.

Then, I think you'll like the progressive change that I'm doing to the MC in Volume 2.

I'll do research*. Pardon my typo.💀