an optimum presentation of "show don't tell", all the dialogues are well written... i have already indulged in them... as if a movie has been playing right before my eyes... lol , seriously the write is great...

Why do my hands itch to beat the ML? Do you feel the same way as I do?

Truly a masterpiece of wonder and creativity! I can't find myself to stop reading further. The emotions are well displayed perfectly captivating my reader's soul...lol... not gonna lie its truly an awesome write..

thanks a lot for the review and motivation..

well it might be spoiler if it is correct, but i think...damien is the mc himself from future... though its just my hypothesis lol..

Thanks a lot bro, i will try to not to repeat my mistake and correct them , also thanks for commenting it keeps motivating me ..

Thanks a lot for the motivation, i will make appropriate changes after sorting out my ideas... hope you will keep supporting me like this..

man i got hooked from starting, a very interesting story well written and expressed , keep up the work , i am adding it to my library as it is the place for such stories to rest....[img=exp][img=recommend]

thanks a lot bother..

THANKS FOR THE ENLIGHTMENT MANGA_WEEB91