Andi_Dri

A good story, with very good grammar; it's hard to find poor grammar in this novel, although the main character (MC) has somewhat unsatisfactory traits or emotions, which makes the story a bit annoying. However, it can roughly be said that this is a side effect of such great power. The author seems to be telling us that every great power has significant side effects as well, a pretty good ideology, even though it seems that most readers do not particularly like an MC who lacks emotions. Although the MC does have emotions, they are suppressed by their abilities. As for the Evil System, I can't say much about it; the System seems to lack intelligence and is just like a simple game system, allowing the MC to summon various characters from the Fate series, like Charlotte Corday—damn! Charlotte Corday! Well, even though Charlotte is not in the Fate series and only exists in the FGO game, it is still very enjoyable to read a fanfic novel that features characters not present in the Fate series and only in the FGO game. The world background of this novel can be said to be quite unique. Well, it's not too bad for me; it can be considered quite good, though not perfect, but it's decent enough. Regarding the illness suffered by the MC, it seems to be some kind of curse or something; I don't quite understand it either. Although some argue why not use the MC's abilities to stop this illness, I can't comment on that. After all, this seems to be a weakness of the MC that is openly written by the author to indicate that the MC is not PERFECT! Because of that, for the MC's development in the future, it seems? The author seems to emphasize that this MC, unlike most MCs who, despite having overpowering abilities, has too many shortcomings and must continue to grow to become better. The author has arranged this quite well, but many express that it doesn't make sense and that the author is very foolish. I don't understand if they don't see it from the author's perspective; if the author wrote the MC as a character who is too strong from the beginning, wouldn't that be very boring? Readers can sometimes be very foolish, so I don't know what to say. Anyway, thank you very much, author! Keep developing! Don't pay attention to the bad words! Keep the good ones to continue growing! And ignore the bad ones that will only worsen your abilities!

Yes, this Harem!

I'm so sorry dude, I didn't know that if my Patreon Page has Mature Content Status it will be difficult to view, so I'm trying to change it to be viewable by all people, from the email I got it can be done within one Week, so if your account is on under the age of 18, then it will be difficult for you to find my Patreon Page, I really didn't know that.

I'm so sorry dude, I didn't know that if my Patreon Page has Mature Content Status it will be difficult to view, so I'm trying to change it to be viewable by all people, from the email I got it can be done within one Week, so if your account is on under the age of 18, then it will be difficult for you to find my Patreon Page, I really didn't know that.

https://www.p@treon.com/Andi_Dri @ replace a, if you still can't find it then it's still in suspension.

Because to me the purpose of the story is exploring, whether it's changing destiny or the matter of the broken timeline, that's easy, I just need to make the Story more troublesome, after all this story is about exploring to various places in the world.

Because to me the purpose of the story is exploring, whether it's changing destiny or the matter of the broken timeline, that's easy, I just need to make the Story more troublesome, after all this story is about exploring to various places in the world.

No No no, she's not Mito, making Mito his Master? Oh it's not bad, but I put better things, hehe you can see for yourself later.

Sure, I'll give it a try.