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Mana_Cake

Mana_Cake

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2023-07-01 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake3mth
    trả lời Daoist6mM4Ra

    this is not a fan fic or any sort. I have taken the creative "liberties to parody the owner by misspelling his name on purpose and giving him a "interesting " personality Of course it isn't defaming or anything

    Ch 1 [PLEASE READ]
    Developer showdown
    Võ hiệp · Mana_Cake
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake4mth
    bình luận

    zanes getting kidnapped

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
    Shackles: Potential Unleashed
    Kỳ huyễn · Kofuku_Novels
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake4mth
    bình luận

    the grammar is a bit wonky and hard to read on a lot of the parts

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    Shackles: Potential Unleashed
    Kỳ huyễn · Kofuku_Novels
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake4mth
    trả lời Vanilla_Chino

    ain't the plot btw ☠️

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời Mana_Cake

    ah okay, I also have eye issues and I was just wondering "why the bold"

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
     công bố

    the only reason why I took a point off is because of how short the chapters are as I feel like more can be expanded on each chapter to give a more "detailed " look at the game.

    Rage Fuel!!!
    Kỳ huyễn · Wisefield
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
     công bố

    While the story itself isn't actually bad I don't necessarily like It myself (that's just personal thing).I don't generally like the Bold style for all text as it could remove some of the "zaz" on the more "impactful" moments on things you'd actually want to express as "important"

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    bình luận

    nice

    Ch 2 Seraphiel
    VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer
    Du hí · AstridStorm
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    bình luận

    It seems interesting so far

    Ch 1 David Graham
    VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer
    Du hí · AstridStorm
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời CastlePanda

    her moving there is more of a hax thing rather than a speed thing

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời Mana_Cake

    speed*

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời CastlePanda

    she doesn't get irrelevant travel soeed

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời ebowl247

    ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️

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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
    trả lời Garessta

    Fax ☠️

    Game Quest
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake5mth
     công bố

    Fax, W Novel seems like bro already got the strongest demon 😈.I'd watch this if it was turned into a anime.

    My Girlfriend Is the Strongest Demon
    Kỳ huyễn · Garessta
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake7mth
     công bố

    (review for the first 2 chapters I've read)the story isn't bad and most people can relate to the struggles of the main characters (as in being poor) especially myself.we can also relate to finding a new friend after awhile or not having a dad.Overall good :)

    The Sleepwalker
    Thành thị · LanumKing
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  • Mana_Cake
    Mana_Cake7mth
    bình luận

    getting yo girl stolen by your UNCLE IS CRAZY 😭

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    Forced surrogate mother
    Thành thị · Edith_Skosana
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