Living in own imagination 🥀❣️
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is there NTR'd and one night stand???
i wanna suggest somtething.. maybe you should stop writing
overall story is good but powerscale is very bad , and mc is a meek boy he is a college student and behave like good well behave meek boy manner kid , somewehere author show mc is smart somewhere loser i goota say this novel is not cup of my tea and its'skindaa suckkk,💩💩💩
overall good story but author you should stop writing immortal like young man , empress like , blah blah like its make story bland 🙃🙃
story progresss ✔️check character development ✔️ check no cliche plot ✔️ check no brain dead plot ✔️check overpowered ✔️ check no extra drama ✔️ check mystery ✔️ check ok then , read again ,✔️✔️✔️
author! discord server?????
what happened in ending chapter of god of time system you still hasn't uploaded correct chapter it still show shoe (DNO)
damn! hell of a attitude 😂😂👍
overall story is good and FL character is good but you should focus on FL character and you should tone down the explaining. its like you are explaining from your point of you but you are trying to 3rd p.o.v