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It is annoying hiw he gets praised for everything. If he took a shit in the street, the author would still make people praise him.

King you poor soul

Matori is what they said though

Needs a #villain tag

The writing quality is terrible. Everything jumbled together it is hard to tell where something starts or ends. Really needs to be formatted properly.

There are one billion slots. How is 7000 or 30000 bad queue numbers? Why is a waste management person more valuable then a skilled repairman?! This does not make sense at all. And I thought this was supposed to be comedy.

So this is a very good fanfic. The main weakness is the power fantasy aspect of it where the MC is the best and most knowledgeable person about pokemon EVER and gets all the rewards, all the fame, and all the praise all the time. And did I also mention he is the most handsome man around too, and random people just start praising how good looking he is? Yea this is one of those fics. Anyway the characters are well done, and the pokemon and the interactions are just what I would want to read about. The battles are well done and there is something of a plot too. Worth checking out at least.

So this is a power fantasy with essentially a system cheat where he has a gameboy that lets him take pokemon and items from the game into his real life. The one thing that I dislike here is that it is hard to tell when he is actually using the gameboy or when he is in real life. The gameboy cheat system trivializes everything since he becomes a millionaire with multiple peak IV stat pokemon in a matter of weeks which I also wish could have been a little bit more of a struggle or restricted somehow. Otherwise this is not terrible.

I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.

Please put a #system tag. Really annoyed that this one as well as this too.