BlueJeans

Truck-kun always making trouble

I like the writing. It's easy to understand and follow.

I feel like we have some similarities in taste on what we like to enjoy reading.

I feel the same here.

the info dump is well written and easy to read.

This is interesting

what kind of beast would appear?

The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.

I thought he's going to go with Miles.

This part is quite difficult to follow. Some of the description of scenes is difficult to follow. especially for non-native English.