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I read all the chapters till now and I didn't like it, the story is exactly like another story "Riser phenex isn't a villain" by akikan and this is extremely rushed I was reading it and suddenly the MC kisses akeno. So this is like the riser phenex isn't a villain but worse
I am being based but I really like your fanfic hope that this will be better than the riser one because I don't know why but I don't really liked that one I didn't hate it but just didn't liked it than your other fanfic so i hope this will be better.
I came here after seeing the cover expecting that it will me great one the greatest fic of Naruto but alas I am truly disappointed 😔😮💨😮💨😮💨
Umm can you also add honkai star rail it is also from mihoyo
Read all the chapters till now I have say It's Really great. I am huge fan of group chat fanfic so I hope you don't drop it and best of luck for your journey of being a writer.
There are way to many unique skill here you should change them to extra skill after all unique skill aren't common
I really liked the description 👍 I wanted to ask How many girls will MC get in this world.
I don't have to say anything except that this is really fuck*Ng good after all yandare is love . Keep up the good work and please don't drop it.
Well let's start the journey👍✅
The premise is good but the translation is just horrible he doesn't even change characters name to the original. I think he just uses Google translation.