Yalatola
To write a great story we need to live them
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The best decision would have been to follow Thomas' plan, but you've resumed the only problem: this Sin a child in mind and was formatted by the others, so they ended regretting when confronted with the facts. The plan would have worked if they could have been monsters till the end.
answer: yes
I give you a big warning: the following 14 chapters will make your blood boil, but trust me, everything that will happen is the base of a great final arc. I'm here in case you need more information, even spoilers if you can't take it anymore.
The true Dora, you'll understand in future chapters (aka 120-184)
yeah👍
two people told me the mc wasn't op on discord, look the current trending, good books nowadays must have op mc beating everything from the beginning
We never know what was on the plan of the author, I too am a reader so as a writer I know what I want and what I'm tired to see. I know where this story is going and I have no intention to write another cliche here to milk the story over thousand chapters.
If you think it was good you should trust the author in what he's doing.
I see
I understand, I'll change that then, thanks
don't know what is legion but ok
Dora 11 years old
many things happens in the shadow
The characters know each other already so they don't need to explain everything but i admit that it was a bad idea for readers. I suggest you check the technical sheets, most of the world building is there for new readers and I can answer if you have more questions
The rest is too long to detail and probably pointless now, but I'll follow directly with the second phase in a few days, hopefully 10 chapters before Monday. The new book will show you more what I tried to do here and the lore, and it will correct the mistakes I made before in many ways. hope to see you there too and make something that you will appreciate