Synergistic
A guy who likes to do what he can but isn't able to do anything because of his lazy attitude
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Just for fun :> and for something else in the future
Don't worry, I'm still inexperienced, so any criticism is something I like to receive, so don't think you are mean I actually like it.
Ah I guess that came out like that. For now, the yesman thing actually have something for that later on as to why it's like that, which is really nice for your to point out. But I have something planned for that later on though I don't know if it will satisfy, I just need to find a proper execution but so far nothing comes to mind, but yeah later on theres something for that :>, Please keep up with the comments it really helps me <33.
Also regarding about the knowledge part, I was planning to give it through the upcoming chapters, still trying to find the right line between info dumping and lack of information, but this comment really helps a lot :DDD
Alright will do keep it in mind for the future! Thank you!!
I actually like this comment. When I first imagined it as well, it felt off to me so much that it seemed very unnatural and just weird. So I went with it.
The author here, I don't know how, or why but this book has some attention. I want to tell you my readers, or anyone who is planning to read this. I will revive this book someday, not today, not tomorrow, but someday, after I finish the other book, which you should try, it's about dinosaurs *ahem*. I promised myself to finish this book after I had enough experience in writing, and outlining the story. I have made improvements on that part but far from what you would call amazing. So moving on, what can you expect from this book if you do try reading this? Enzo, a boy with such an interesting background (My writing is not up to par yet please I will redo it from chapter 1) is placed with a sudden burden to possibly be able to seal off the Oscillations that come out from the Forest that continues to eternally grow. This story has some mysterious, maybe a bit of horror elements to it but it is my first novel that I cherish and someday I would be back to revive my baby. P.S. While Writing this, it feels like I'm the dad who went out for milk!.
Thank you very much. I hope you have a good day. I appreciate it :>
Ah I see what you mean, got it
No, it was lil bro Morpheus 8)
Nemesis was the first Rex. Morpheus is the second Rex
Got it Thank youuu!
50 Chapter Milestone So Good day Dinosaurs, I am the author (well duh) and I just want to share that I appreciate all your support and your comments regarding my mistakes and other helpful incites that allowed me to grow as an author and improve my writing. Present situation, I will be frank there will be days that I will not upload and there are days that I will, I hope and beg that you please understand if the situation arises to such a degree of upload lag between days. I am now experiencing the difficulties of life and I am preparing myself to move forward in the guise that I would overcome those trials in life. I will continue to improve my writing and will actually try various writing styles and see how I adjust to them and how I can incorporate them. Enough about me and my silly redundancies. Let us talk about the story. The 50th chapter will mark the ending of the first arc of the novel which would be about Arthas fighting off that creature, following in The next arc will be situated around the school. Which means School Arc! Expect this to be slow as I would incorporate a lot of school aspects to try and make it feel as natural as I can, There would be a lot of familiarities and some twists would be given. Furthermore, the story would only expand as new dinosaurs, and rivals might sprout from the ground and make things harder for our not-so-loving responsibility main character. As a final message, I ask that you be patient if the time comes that I have stopped uploading, however, I will say when I shall have difficulties for that particular day/week. Thank you Dinosaurs for all your support and suggestions.
It would still be 7 days, though. Thank you for noticing that. I was gonna reread the chapters but got caught up with workload, I really appreciate it!
Ah, that was a misinput X_X it was 70 percent on my drafted document, Thank you for noticing, and I will change that.
Thank you!
Alright will do