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Oh, thanks I'll work on it at once
Hey. I rewrote the first chapter. Check it out and give me your thoughts. Hope it's better than the first version.
Good beginning, good style, nice world building and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep up the good work, author.
Thank you for the feedback. Will do
I loved it from the beginning. There was already tension right from the prologue. Let's hope it just gets better