SinSm0kes_Kettle

I loved this story, the only complaint I have is that the entire story took place in a mere 10 days. I mean, you can stretch that they trusted each other so quickly because of the “mutual struggle” but come on now. I feel like at least a 1 week time skip before he started getting anything meaningful would’ve given us an idea of how difficult things were actually supposed to be. But that’s my only complaint, otherwise, amazing work 🥰

I love the story! I can definitely feel the improvement in the writing quality over time. While there are a number of typos and slightly confusing sentences, overall you can get the story, the characters, and their interactions are a joy to read. Keep up the good work!

I never saw those uno cards, picks or it didn’t happen 😶🫵

I am SO disappointed I didn’t get to see them play cards 😤 lemme speak to your editor ☹️👉

Omg! Is Sable a bonafide they/them? Gender neutrality is so slay 🙏

Excited to see where this leads 🙏