FabianMorris

I’ve finished chapter 4 but I don’t feel like revising it tonight. I don’t want to upload it without revising it because I did that with chapters 1,2, and 3 and a lot of people didn’t like that understandably. So I’m going to be posting chapter 4 tomorrow as well as fix chapter 3. I hope this doesn’t upset to many people. Chapter 4. Welcome to Lian Yu Coming tomorrow

I agree with you I don’t want to spoil anything that’s going to happen but I will tell you he’s definitely going to be doing his own thing and not in Oliver’s shadow

the paragraph you commented on says what the third wish is. The first wish, become Oliver Queens brother. The second wish, all of wolverines abilities. The third wish, all of Batman abilities. And finally it’s not a wish but god granted Logan(MC) system/template to slowly gain the abilities of Batman and wolverine. So if you would continue reading you will see in chapter two his claws are still bone but I will have a solution to the admantium poisoning once he gains the admantium exoskeleton.

Thank you for commenting I hope you continue to read my story even if there’s things you don’t like about it

Thank you for the comment and suggestion julien under the reviews said the same thing whenever I get free Time I plan to go back and fix that and make sure its better going forward

Thank you for the review. I’m trying to get better with my consistency, grammar and alot of other things. So I appreciate everyone that’s reading commenting and interacting with me and I hope y’all continue to enjoy the story.

Ok thank you for the advice when I get time I’ll go back and fix that. I’ll make sure to have proper spacing going forward.

Sorry for the late upload chapter 1 and 2 are edited so they should be easier to read. Let me know y’all’s opinioninion on this chapter.

Kind of yeah, I was planning on making it to where as he(MC) maxes out his abilities/skills he will get all the knowledge and memories to the particular ability/skill that he maxed out. Thank you for commenting stay updated I plan to drop another chapter by this Friday.

Sorry for the short chapter I plan on make them longer going forward