CatasOR8
Goal: to release a mind blowing novel one day
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He fell to his knees. Kind of like losing the strength in his legs
Thanks for the review. Yeah, you bet I was disappointed since it wasn't what I was expecting, but it's cool nonetheless. Your preference I suppose 😁😁 I want to say to keep reading, at least until the free chapter is over. If you do you would notice that I elaborated on the reason and it wasn't just because of the excuse that he stated himself. Either way, it's cool, all is good. Since you took the time to review and was explicit on how good it was before that part. I appreciate the effort you took to give the novel a chance. Really, I do 😑😑
How about thinking of it in this direction; he is revising the plan with the involved members just moments before putting it into action, as he had assumed most were in the ballroom
Sister not brother
Let me explain his mentality as of current.He is a teenager who has only known pain all his life. The only person he considers as family, got killed in front of him. And as it turns out, he absorbed her memories after she died.He saw how much she loathes the world and as a tribute to her death, he decided on world destruction, to eradicate the world that has shown him nothing but unfairness.One thing to note here is that he was looking at the world in a one-sided way. He lived in the street where death is common while things like guilt or conscience are considered a weakness.
Ding, you are wrong. First, he is not tyrannical, he is rational and open-minded, yet cold when the situation demands. And second, he won't just be getting powers left and right, nor will he easily awaken the system.To understand my words without having any spoilers, read the synopsis again.
I appreciate expressing your concerns and even I am well aware of that. The whole plot has not changed one bit. My goal is to write about a character with the ability to create weapons as a form of his magical attribute, craft several other items, and master them using his platinum ability. That hasn't changed one bit. Why I decided to change the start of the story is to find something unique to the character, to express him in a comfortable way that will not seem overdoing or underdoing. And I have found the perfect character for this start is the main story, and it is here to stay. So therefore my dear reader, bear with my inconsistency for it will not happen again.
This chapter feels forced, like trying to raise the Mc profile which honestly is just all wrong. Instigating a fight with someone stronger than you is a dumb thing to do for a 23-year-old. Though I have to admit that his actions so far have shown that he is not as smart as his age. There is also the typical troupe of the character promising to not use their skill, giving the Mc an advantage, why? If you were that honourable, to begin with, you would not have stooped so low to picking on a kid.